Book Review

February Book Reviews

Information in a Nutshell: Business Tips and Taxes for Writers by Carol Topp

New for 2018, covers the new tax laws and a new section for bloggers. Are you a writer serious about making money and keeping it? Business Tips and Taxes for Writers takes the mystery out of the tax code and allows you to understand the business of being an author. You will learn:>The best business structure for writers>Special tax breaks for writers>Legitimate tax deductions>Writing as a ministry>Bloggers and record keeping musts>Simple and easy record keeping>Dealing with inventory and sales tax, and so much more! This informative book will help you keep your hard earned money and have the peace of mind associated with doing it correctly! 

As I am going to be self publishing a book this year, I wanted to try and get ahead so that next year, I don’t have any issues when it comes to the dreaded tax word. While I don’t usually read a lot of non-fiction, as a business owner in a sense, it’s important to be prepared for important things like taxes.

I ended up skipping chunks of the book that didn’t really apply to my situation. It gave me a little more information than what I knew before, which is a great thing, as far as what forms to file and the types of things that can be considered tax deductions.

For the size of the book, I found it to be slightly overpriced, but I understand that it takes money to make books. This one will be going on my resource shelf. Before I read this, I already started compiling receipts and other important things so that I could file properly next year.

Obviously, the best place to go with tax questions and concerns is a CPA, and I fully intend on doing that next year. I can do my taxes for my day job, but this is something that I’m definitely not versed enough to do. Soooooo when Guns & Smoke comes out later this year, could you all buy a dozen copies so that I actually have income to report for 2021? 😀

Taxes are such a confusing thing, mainly because I feel like we should have had an “Adult Life Skills” class in high school. You know, taxes, basic information about loans (student loans are predatory AF), how to make a budget, how to save. These are all skills that I’ve had to pick up over the years. Instead of focusing on the Pythagorean theorem, maybe spend a little extra time teaching our students things they’ll actually need? Okay, rant over. Thanks for coming to my TED talk.

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Rebel Rose by Emma Theriault

Happily ever after is only the beginning as Belle takes on the responsibility of becoming queen and learns to balance duty, love, and sacrifice, all while navigating dark political intrigue—and a touch of magic.

It’s 1789 and France is on the brink of revolution. Belle has finally broken the Enchantress’s curse, restoring the Beast to his human form and bringing life back to their castle in the province of Aveyon. But in Paris, the fires of change are burning, and it’s only a matter of time before the rebellion arrives on their doorstep.

Not so very long ago, Belle dreamed of leaving her provincial home for a life of adventure. But now she finds herself living in a palace, torn between her past as a commoner, and her future as royalty. While Belle grapples with her newfound position, there are those who would do anything to keep her from power.

When she stumbles across a magic mirror that holds a dire warning, Belle wants nothing more than to ignore the mysterious voice calling her to accept a crown she never desired. But violent factions of the revolution may already be lurking within her own castle, and doing nothing would endanger everything she holds dear. With the fate of her country, her love, and her life at stake, Belle must decide if she is ready to embrace her own strength–and the magic that ties her to so many female rulers before her–to become the queen she is meant to be.

Rebel Rose is the first in the Queen’s Council series, an empowering fairy tale reimagining of the Disney Princesses-and the real history behind their stories-like you’ve never seen before. 

I’ve seen this book all over my social media pages lately, so I’ve wanted to read it, but it wasn’t totally a priority for me. I tend to read books in tandem with their e-books because it can be difficult to carry the hard copy around with me to work, the doctor’s etc.

Anyways. I won a copy of this book off of twitter, and once the ebook came available through the library, I ran for it!

First off, I would like to say that Beauty and the Beast is my second favorite Disney fairytale. I’ve always loved Belle. Her reprise is the single best song in any Disney movie.

I want adventure in the great, wide somewhere… I want it more than I can tell!

Like come on, how could any bookish person not want that?!

Anyways. I had no idea what the book was about before I started reading it. I’ll admit, I thought it was a retelling or a reimagining similar to A Curse So Dark and Lonely. Howeverrrrr… it was not. It was a direct continuation of Beauty and the Beast from the original Disney story, with bits that I feel were put in as a result of the Disney live action version (Gaston and returning from the war!). I really wanted to like it.

What we find is that the end of Beauty and the Beast is not all happily ever after.

Bella and Lio (the Beast. I thought he was Adam, but…?) are going to Paris to visit a cousin and indoctrinate themselves in with the French court. But the story starts around the time that King Louis and Marie Antionette are facing severe backlash from the commoners (which eventually leads to a lot of French royals losing their heads…hey revolution!).

I wanted to like this. I wanted to like it a lot. It is definitely a cute story about Belle and the Beast and what happens later. It’s very realistic because as French nobles, they would be faced with a lot of the historical issues facing France at the time.

For my tastes, to put it simply, there was too much of French politics and not enough romance! I need a book that has a good romantic storyline, one that makes me want to keep reading all of the way through and…this…just…wasn’t? It’s not a bad story. I think it has potential to be a very good series, but since the main character and her prince are already hooked up, where’s the romance? That’s just my opinion, honestly. If you don’t like romance and want to see what happened after the Happily Ever After, this just might be the story for you. For me, it wasn’t. I rated it three stars because I felt as though the story was really well written. I found myself getting caught up in the prose in ways I usually don’t in books. The author did a really wonderful job of writing the story. Three stars for me, but it might be something you like!

Rating: 3 out of 5.

The Anatomy of Prose by Sacha Black

Do your sentences fail to sound the way you want? Are they lackluster, with flat characters and settings? Is your prose full of bad habits and crutches?

In The Anatomy of Prose, you’ll discover: 

A step-by-step guide to creating descriptions that sing, The key to crafting character emotions that will hook a reader, How to harness all five senses to make your stories come alive, deepening your reader’s experience Tips and tricks for balancing details at the sentence level, Methods for strengthening each sentence through strategic word choice, rhythm and flow
Dozens of literary devices, and how to utilize them to give your prose power
Tactics for differentiating characters in dialogue as well as making it punchy and unforgettable, A comprehensive prose-specific self-editing check list, How to embody your character’s personality at the sentence level, The most common pitfalls and mistakes to avoid 

The Anatomy of Prose is a comprehensive writing guide that will help you create sensational sentences. Whether you’re just starting out or are a seasoned writer, this book will power up your prose, eliminate line-level distractions and help you find the perfect balance of show and tell. By the end of this book, you’ll know how to strengthen your sentences to give your story, prose and characters the extra sparkle they need to capture a reader’s heart.

If you like dark humor, learning through examples and want to create perfect prose, then you’ll love Sacha Black’s guide to crafting sensational sentences. Read The Anatomy of Prose today and start creating kick-ass stories.

Yay! Another craft book! I joined the Rebel Authors group on Facebook a while back. Sacha Black is one of the main admins, and a close friend recommended reading a couple of her craft books. So, here we are!

One thing I have struggled with is finding the right craft books. I’ve read some that I’ve hated (Anatomy of Story UGH), I really enjoy the ones that feel like the author is speaking right down into my soul. From the onset of the book, I appreciated that Black doesn’t shy away from swear words, and she is able to put her tips and advice in a coherent form that doesn’t feel stunted or like she’s talking down to you. From the first chapter, I knew that I would like this book.

While I won’t go into all of the details, because there is so much that she talks about, one of the early points she made is to become a better writer, you have to read. Not just read, but read with purpose. I’ve never thought about that before. She suggested that if you find something you really like in another story, mark it, save it, and analyze it later so you can decided why you like it, and how you can use that in your own writing. I read a lot. Most of the time, I just read for enjoyment, but after reading The Anatomy of Prose, I fully intend on reading with purpose.

Sacha has a line of craft books targeted at authors. I also purchased a copy of her villians book, and I can’t wait to get started on that one.

One thing I regret is that I didn’t plan properly when I started reading this so I could annotate and mark the book up when I found something that I liked. Not that I’m complaining, I will definitely be reading this again soon so that I can mark up the parts that really spoke to me. I hate actually writing in books, but I feel like this is one case where I can make an exception.

I’ve also been a member of Sacha’s Rebel Authors Facebook group. She does so much for the writing community, including a podcast. I can’t wait to start it! I have to finish catching up on five years of My Favorite Murder before I can take on another podcast, but I really cannot wait to get into the Rebel Authors podcast.

One thing you have to do is a writer is keep learning, keep pushing, keep writing. I love when I find a good craft book that doesn’t feel stuffy or that you’re being talked down to. I also love people that have a potty mouth like me, so I feel like Sacha and I would be great friends if given the chance. If you’re looking for a good book that gives you tips and tricks on how to be a better writer at the sentence level, definitely check this out! Don’t let the size of the book intimidate you. It is a very fast read (I read it basically over the course of a weekend), and Sacha has so many good things that every writer could learn from this book!

Rating: 5 out of 5.
This poetry collection captures the essence of early adulthood–the romantic and sexual relationships, the hopefulness, the despair, and the eventual self-acceptance. The tone shifts back and forth between romantic, angry, nostalgic, inspirational, and even humorous. With these poems, the author depicts all her failed attempts at love (with many boys, and one very special girl), while always trying to remain confident in the belief that who she is is, in fact, enough. These poems are for anyone who’s had their heart broken and managed to love again. And for anyone who’s just doing their best to navigate their way through this messy world.

I’ve been friends with Tammy for several years. When I saw that she was publishing a book of poetry, I knew I would have to buy it. I don’t usually read poetry, but I love supporting my friends. I purchased my copy last year right before the world went to hell. It sat on my dresser for months. I just couldn’t bring myself to pick it up.

Finally, when I was looking for something that didn’t require tons of hours of reading, I decided to read it, and I am really glad that I did.

Tammy and I are roughly the same age. I found a lot of her poems managed to capture the experience of a mid-2000s millennial like myself. She wrote about love and coffee and loneliness. There were so many poems throughout that I related to. It was almost like I could have written those words. What I love most is that she didn’t shy away from the hard stuff. The regret when you reach your thirties and you still aren’t married with children–even if it’s not something you’re sure you want, society still puts that pressure on you. I finished reading this in two sittings, and let me tell you, I walked away from it feeling a little less alone. It’s easy to sometimes get inside of your own head, especially when you think about all of the things you’re not or don’t have. I feel like I got to know my friend a little better. Poetry is a very different medium to novel writing. Of course it doesn’t take as much to devour the words, but I really felt like her poems struck me. I found myself nodding along with them, agreeing with them. I really love that she didn’t shy away from the hard stuff. If you’re looking for something that’s a lighter read, but also has plenty of mid-2000s references, talks about love and loss, sprinkled with some feministic thoughts, please pick up a copy!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Whatever, Jerk by Nikki Paris

Dani
Danica Lynn Jepson is a failure. That’s right, I said it. I had my shot at life, and I failed. My fame is gone, my money is gone, and the stutter that I spent years in speech therapy trying to control is rearing its ugly head. I think my parents still like me, maybe my best friend, and sometimes my dog, but that’s it. One thing’s for sure; my sexy new neighbor can’t stand me. It’s fine, though, because he’s a jerk and the feeling is mutual.
Connor
Princess Dani is a brat. She and her pretty blonde hair and mind-numbing ass can just go back to wherever they came from. I don’t need her all up in my space, making me think about things I shouldn’t be thinking about. It’s my fault that I lost the love of my life two years ago, and I plan on living in my self-assigned purgatory for the next forever. And just so we’re clear, if I ever did decide to move on, it wouldn’t be with Dani.

I recently started using my TikTok account as an author platform. What’s really cool is all of the authors I’ve been able to connect with. I won a copy of this book from Nikki by interacting with her account.

While I would like to start with a disclaimer, I also want to be sure that I’m being honest. Disclaimer: contemporary romance isn’t my favorite genre. I enjoy romance of just about any kind, but I am especially looking for diverse romances in the contemporary sphere (interracial, LGBTQ+, etc.). That being said, Whatever, Jerk was a cute, quirky standard contemporary romance. The main characters, Dani and Connor, both annoyed the hell out of me in the beginning. That happens when characters are stubborn and in denial about attraction.

It took me a little bit to get into the story because I didn’t really like the main characters. Once Connor’s nephew, Marshall, was introduced, however, the story picked up. Maybe it’s because I have nephews and so a little piece of me melted when I saw how Connor behaved with his nephew as opposed to nearly everyone else in his life.

As a writer myself, it’s really easy to be critical of another’s writing. I found the story lacked when it came to showing and not telling. Most of the time, I felt like I was in a black box and I didn’t know anything about the scene around the characters. While I love what the author has done to create a brand for herself, I also would like to see more descriptions and more showing in her other stuff. That being said, props for indie publishing! Writing is hard, publishing is hard, and to have the confidence to do it takes a LOT. Mad respect for anyone who is an indie published author. While diverse stories were one thing I wanted to add to my reading list this year, I also wanted to add more indies! If you’re looking for a casual easy contemporary romance, be sure to check this out! I believe it’s on Kindle Unlimited, too!

Rating: 3 out of 5.

13 Steps to Evil: How to Craft Superbad Villains by Sacha Black

Your hero is not the most important character in your book. Your villain is.
 
Are you fed up of drowning in two-dimensional villains? Frustrated with creating clichés? And failing to get your reader to root for your villain?
  
In 13 Steps to Evil, you’ll discover: 
How to develop a villain’s mindset
A step-by-step guide to creating your villain from the ground up
Why getting to the core of a villain’s personality is essential to make them credible 
What pitfalls and clichés to avoid as well as the tropes your story needs
Finally, there is a comprehensive writing guide to help you create superbad villains. Whether you’re just starting out or are a seasoned writer, this book will help power up your bad guy and give them that extra edge.

These lessons will help you master and control your villainous minions, navigate and gain the perfect balance of good and evil, as well as strengthening your villain to give your story the tension and punch it needs.
 
If you like dark humour, learning through examples and want to create the best villains you can, then you’ll love Sacha Black’s guide to crafting superbad villains. Read 13 Steps to Evil today and start creating kick-ass villains.

I completed a project back in November for National Novel Writing Month.

From the time I finished, I knew that the villian in the story was weak. When I purchased Sacha Black’s Anatomy of a Story, I also purchased a copy of this book. I needed to figure out my villian’s purpose so I could then finish actually writing the story.

Once again, I love Sacha’s fresh voice and that she doesn’t shy away from slang and swear words. Her examples of villians in popular culture made it simpler for me to understand villian arcs. She also has a great section on anti-heroes.

Through reading Sacha’s craft books, I feel like I have a better understanding of creating characters and creating prose that is not only entertaining to read, but reads really well. I’ve also finally gotten started on the Rebel Authors podcast. While I’m only a few episodes in, I can already tell that it’s going to provide a lot of great resources for authors. You should definitely check it out.

While reading this book, I was able to give my villian their own arc and motivation. Their motivations were shakey at best in the original manuscript, but now they have a backstory and the right motivation. In taking the time to craft my villian, I’ve been able to add an extra layer to the story to make it believable and interesting to readers.

One thing I’ve always struggled with it finding craft books that read well and make sense. A lot of the popular craft books out there make me feel like I’m being talked down to. Sacha’s books are the complete opposite.

I feel as though I should do a post specifically on craft books for writers. I’ve been able to learn so much over the last six months or so about writing craft, story structure, and character building. I may do something like this in the future if anyone is interested.

All in all, if you’re looking for a craft book to help you with villians, anti-heroes, and antagonists, definitely check out Sacha’s Better Writers series.

Also, if you have suggestions on craft books you love, please drop them in the comments! I am absolutely looking for any and every resource that could help me be a better writer!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

The Wicked King by Holly Black

You must be strong enough to strike and strike and strike again without tiring.

The first lesson is to make yourself strong.

After the jaw-dropping revelation that Oak is the heir to Faerie, Jude must keep her younger brother safe. To do so, she has bound the wicked king, Cardan, to her, and made herself the power behind the throne. Navigating the constantly shifting political alliances of Faerie would be difficult enough if Cardan were easy to control. But he does everything in his power to humiliate and undermine her even as his fascination with her remains undiminished.

When it becomes all too clear that someone close to Jude means to betray her, threatening her own life and the lives of everyone she loves, Jude must uncover the traitor and fight her own complicated feelings for Cardan to maintain control as a mortal in a Faerie world.

So I liked the Cruel Prince, I didn’t quite love it. I’ve heard so much about the slow enemies to lovers romance, so I decided to stick it out and keep reading.

From the get go of this book, Jude is intense. Like, I really didn’t enjoy a lot of the stuff that she had to do from a political fae standpoint. I liked the push and pull between she and Cardan. I definitely enjoyed the heat between them (however few scenes of it there were). I didn’t really like the whole kidnapping plot. It felt a little unrealistic for me. I didn’t get why the water queen (whatever her name was lol) would immediately go for kidnapping Jude. I guess it’s because the one who betrayed her told them. BUT. They could have also told them about Jude’s control over Cardan. Maybe I missed it and that was something she didn’t share with her spies. I dunno.

Her sisters really annoy me. Vivi, I can somewhat understand her actions, but Taryn is annoying as all get out. I don’t understand her motivations. I don’t understand how you can literally share a womb with someone, grow up as their best friend and main confidante in a world where you’re not wanted, and betray them like Taryn betrayed Jude. Maybe it’s something that will be explored more in the third book, but it felt really unnatural for me.

Now. The Ending. I won’t post details here, but basically it was a twist boom bang like the first book in the series. It wasn’t necessarily bad. But it wasn’t necessarily good either. I have a tendency for softness when it comes to the ‘bad’ characters, so I’d like to believe that this character’s motivations are one thing, but then again, he’s a faerie and I just don’t know.

I’ll be reading the third one, simply to see how it all ends, but I’m not too sure about reading much else by this author. I wish this story lived up to the hype a little more. Maybe it’s because it’s YA, but the hype seems a little overdone based on what I’ve read so far. Maybe the last book will change my opinion.

Rating: 4 out of 5.

A Court of Silver Flames by Sarah J Maas

Nesta Archeron has always been prickly-proud, swift to anger, and slow to forgive. And ever since being forced into the Cauldron and becoming High Fae against her will, she’s struggled to find a place for herself within the strange, deadly world she inhabits. Worse, she can’t seem to move past the horrors of the war with Hybern and all she lost in it.

The one person who ignites her temper more than any other is Cassian, the battle-scarred warrior whose position in Rhysand and Feyre’s Night Court keeps him constantly in Nesta’s orbit. But her temper isn’t the only thing Cassian ignites. The fire between them is undeniable, and only burns hotter as they are forced into close quarters with each other.

Meanwhile, the treacherous human queens who returned to the Continent during the last war have forged a dangerous new alliance, threatening the fragile peace that has settled over the realms. And the key to halting them might very well rely on Cassian and Nesta facing their haunting pasts.

Against the sweeping backdrop of a world seared by war and plagued with uncertainty, Nesta and Cassian battle monsters from within and without as they search for acceptance-and healing-in each other’s arms.

This was my most anticipated read of 2021.

Warning: there are spoilers, so please do not read further if you haven’t finished ACOSF.

It’s been about two years since the novella, A Court of Frost and Starlight dropped, and it literally was just a tease into the next book.

Enter. Nessian.

The first time I read the ACOTAR series, I read it for Feyre and Rhysand. Their love story was incredible. I fell in love with it just like most of the rest of the world. The second time, I fell in love with Cassian. Cassian…and how he was with Nesta. I know a lot of folks out there hate Nesta. They didn’t see why she should get her own book. That’s the thing about well written characters: they have shades of gray, layers, and things hidden beneath the hard exterior that deserve to be delved into.

I am so glad that Sarah wrote this novel.

First off, she thicc. This book is 750 pages. And a lot of it is SMUT. And. I. Am. Here. For. It. I knew that Nesta and Cassian would be dirty. That did not disappoint. This book was everything that I wanted when it came to exploring Nesta: her trauma, her journey, her redemption. I adore her. I adored reading her perspective and seeing how she sees Cassian. I loved seeing the way she affected Cassian with simply a look. The two of them being locked together in the House of Wind was super fun.

That being said, there are a few things I had problems with.

First off, didn’t we cancel Tamlin for keeping Feyre essentially locked up and locked out? Isn’t that the same thing Rhysand did in this book? Come on, you can say all you want he was “trying to protect” her but if it was Tamlin doing this shit, everyone would be cancelling him all over again. I did not like this plot point. I didn’t like the *SPOILER* pregnancy plot point, but we knew it was coming based off of TOG and ACOFAS, plus Sarah was pregnant around the time she wrote this.

Secondly. Where was Mor? There’s been a lot of dialogue around Maas’s lack of diversity. She doesn’t have many POC characters (and even then, they’re side characters) and she has literally one main LGBTQ+ character. In ACOWAR, she revealed that Mor prefers females, which is why she never pursued Azriel. In ACOWAR, she told us through dialogue with Mor and Feyre that Mor preferred females. She didn’t show us. You can tell me all you want, I won’t believe it until I see it. (She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named saying Dumbledore is gay instead of showing it in the text is the same damn thing) That being said, Mor is barely in ACOSF. She’s absent so much that it feels like Sarah didn’t want to write her into this one. As if she were avoiding writing Mor. I was incredibly disappointed. Mor couldn’t have been doing that much in another territory to have such a small role in this book. And even when she was in the chapters, she wasn’t the Mor we already know. I have a feeling the next book will be Azriel. And if there isn’t more Mor, I dunno how I’m going to feel about it.

There were two bonus chapters in a couple of the editions of the books. If you haven’t read them, you may want to find them and read them if you don’t want spoilers.

The Feysand one was typical Feysand, I don’t have any comments or complaints. The Azriel one, however… I have some thoughts. Firstly, if Elain is interested in Az, great, let me see it, and then let’s go. But I feel like this is the only time there’s even been a glimpse of something between them other than him being protective of her. That being said, the argument between Rhysand and Az sort of pissed me off. Az’s comment about there being three of the Archeron sisters and three of Illyrians really made me bristle. He is not owed anything, and that’s how it felt to me. I’ve always liked Az. I almost wish I hadn’t read this bonus chapter because it gave me a bitter taste in my mouth about him. That being said, I really hope he and Gwyn have a romance. I’d love to see her be able to work through her trauma and for Az to have a happy ending. His shadow didn’t retreat from her. That has to mean something.

Alright. I thoroughly enjoyed ACOSF. I loved everything about it. I wish the mate moment had been bigger, but let’s be real, we all knew they were mates since before Nesta was even fae.

I can’t wait to see what Maas does next. Let’s hope she fixes some of her problematic stuff, because I hate seeing people fight about it.

Rating: 5 out of 5.

A Vow So Bold and Deadly by Brigid Kemmerer

Face your fears, fight the battle.
Emberfall is crumbling fast, torn between those who believe Rhen is the rightful prince and those who are eager to begin a new era under Grey, the true heir. Grey has agreed to wait two months before attacking Emberfall, and in that time, Rhen has turned away from everyone–even Harper, as she desperately tries to help him find a path to peace.

Fight the battle, save the kingdom.
Meanwhile, Lia Mara struggles to rule Syhl Shallow with a gentler hand than her mother. But after enjoying decades of peace once magic was driven out of their lands, some of her subjects are angry Lia Mara has an enchanted prince and a magical scraver by her side. As Grey’s deadline draws nearer, Lia Mara questions if she can be the queen her country needs.

As the two kingdoms come closer to conflict, loyalties are tested, love is threatened, and an old enemy resurfaces who could destroy them all, in this stunning conclusion to bestselling author Brigid Kemmerer’s Cursebreaker series.

Alright. So if you read my January reviews, you know I have thoughts about this series. That didn’t stop with the second book.

I wanted to like this. I was hoping after the disappointments I felt in the second book, that this one would turn things around.

Oh boy, was I wrong.

What did I like? Grey. Grey is the best character in this entire world. He is honorable and kind, but fierce and loyal when he has to be. I’ve loved Grey since the very first book. I always shipped he and Harper. When Harper remained behind and Grey left Emberfall, I was really upset. The two of them had this chemistry, but yet…she and Rhen? I’ve never bought the romance between Rhen and Harper. It didn’t feel natural to me in the first book. It didn’t feel natural to me all through the series.

I can’t stand Lia Mara. She is the most annoying character in the entire series, and I find it hard to believe that people would follow her. She and Grey’s romance is absolutely not believable. Again, I wish the author would have made her an ace character, so that Grey could still get a romance with Harper and an alliance with Syhl Shallow.

The best part about the ending was Rhen and Grey reconciling and showing their brotherly love for one another. But the rest of it left me feeling unsettled, like the story isn’t really over yet. I didn’t like where it ended. I wanted to feel for Rhen. I wanted to root for him by the end, but it almost feels like I got cheated.

All in all, this was a pretty depressing finale to this trilogy. It had good parts–don’t mistake me. If you’re looking for a story that’s well written in a fantasy world, please read it. I just have a bad taste in my mouth because it wasn’t a satisfactory ending to the series for me. I tend to be a little more critical of stories than most. A lot of people love the series. More power to them. The only way I’ll pick up something else from this author is if it has Grey in it. He’s perfect. But the rest of the characters are…not.

Rating: 3 out of 5.

As always, thanks for reading,
Abbie

Writing

Diverse Characters & Getting It Right

I recently finished reading Cassandra Clare’s LORD OF SHADOWS (LOS). I have been a fan of Clare’s since I picked up her work last year. It started with LADY MIDNIGHT (the first in THE DARK ARTIFICES (TDA) series), of which LORD OF SHADOWS is the sequel). I got about 100 pages into the book, but felt like I was missing something. And I was. Something huge.  TDA series is a sequel series to THE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS (TMI). If you’ve seen the movie City of Bones or the show Shadowhunters, you’ll recognize the name.

I started with TMI series and immediately I was hooked. Clare’s urban fantasy series hook you in and take you along for the ride. There’s no warning. One second, you’re reading CITY OF BONES, and the next, you’re eight books in wondering how the hell you got there. Her stuff is that good.

From Clary Fray and Jace Herondale, to Alec Lightwood and Magnus Bane, to Emma Carstairs and Julian Blackthorn–her characters are so well done. Not only is it easy to relate to the characters, but I found myself completely enraptured in their stories. The characters are loveable, with natural flaws (selflessness in the example of Julian, or vanity in the case of Jace). There’s plenty of romance, magic, and lots of ass-kicking battle scenes. Shadowhunters are Nephilim, a race of half-human, half angel, charged with killing demons and maintaining order between races of Downworlders (vampires, werewolves, faeries, etc.)

But beneath all of the fantastical elements of the stories are very real themes that apply to the world today. In TMI, Alec Lightwood is a gay character. But he’s not completely out yet. You see, in the world of the Shadowhunters, being different is something that’s frowned upon. He’s worried about what being open about his sexuality would be to his family, to the eyes of the Clave (those responsible for maintaining Shadowhunter laws). I loved the real dive into what it’s like in America to be a gay man. I thought Clare did an amazing job with Alec’s story of coming into himself and finding love with Magnus Bane (High Warlock of Brooklyn and sass master).

So, in LADY MIDNIGHT (LM), we dive into the story of the Blackthorn family (who were briefly in TMI series at the end). Five years have passed since the end of the Dark War. The Blackthorn family has eight living members: Helen (exiled because she’s part faerie), Mark (part faerie, in the Wild Hunt), Julian, Tiberius, Olivia, Drusilla, Octavian, and Emma Carstairs (an adopted Blackthorn at least). Through the journey of LM, you learn the quips and quirks of each character.

Tiberius (Ty) is a highly logical young man. Julian (who’s been left in charge since losing their parents in the Dark War) has found ways over the years to help Ty understand things like sarcasm and metaphors, as well as given him tools to keep his hands and mind busy when he’s feeling overwhelmed. In LM, it is never addressed head on that Ty is autistic.

In LOS, a new character is thrust into Ty’s world. Christopher “Kit” Herondale is a Shadowhunter, but didn’t know it before. He had a relatively normal upbringing in the mundane (mortal) world. He knows things about mundane medicine and treatments. He is the first character to mention the word autistic. You see, the Clave has banned use of any and all mundane medical treatment. If a Shadowhunter were to seek treatment, they could face exile. They have their own methods for healing, none of which includes doctors. And because Ty is different, Julian is terrified something may happen to him. That the members of Clave will notice there’s something different about him and mistreat him.

There’s a second character, Arthur Blackthorn, uncle to the children, who’s gone mad. His mind was broken in the faerie courts. But they can’t let anyone know he’s mad, because if he is outed, the Clave could split the children up. All they want is to be together.

There’s a third character who turns out to be transgender in LOS. I will spare the spoilers for anyone who hasn’t read it.

Each of these characters face harsh treatment at the hands of the Clave, much as people with autism, mental health issues, and are transgender deal with in normal society in the real world.

I was absolutely floored by Clare’s treatment of these diverse characters. I’ll admit, I’ve kept my characters pretty “standard” in my own writing. There’s always the fear of trying to tackle serious issues like these and doing it badly. As a writer, you have to be sensitive when it comes to touchy subjects. Some people even go so far as to have sensitivity readers to ensure their work isn’t putting those characters down. It is a very slippery slope. You don’t want to offend and you certainly don’t want to do an injustice to issues that real people deal with every day.

In the middle of reading this, I stopped and texted my best friend because I had to tell someone. I didn’t want to post spoilers on the internet (this was barely a day after the book was released and I’d already seen some posts spoiling it for me!). I genuinely applaud Clare for the job she’s done. Using these issues to represent the stigma surrounding these social issues in America (and the world, really) today was such a brilliant move. Thousands of people read her books. And even if just one of those readers come away with a greater understanding of people facing these issues, then her job as a writer is done.

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Brava, Cassie Clare! I look forward to the final installment in TDA series, as well as the additional two series in this universe. I look forward to seeing what other diverse characters she cooks up.

If you’re interested in her work, check out her website here. Of the three published full series, I would suggest starting with THE INFERNAL DEVICES, as it’s first chronologically. Will Herondale is probably my favorite of the Shadowhunters in all of the series. Then, THE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS (first published, second chronologically) before diving into THE DARK ARTIFICES.