Book Review

Book Review: Mystic Bonds by C.C. Solomon

Mage Amina Langston thought surviving the supernatural apocalypse, which killed fifty percent of humankind and changed most of the surviving population into paranormal beings, were the biggest challenges in her life. That is, until she and her brother go on the run from non-gifted humans who want to steal their magical blood to make a power-giving serum. Now she’s in search of a handsome stranger who keeps appearing in her dreams and a secret paranormal city to help free those still held in captivity for their blood.

During her journey, Amina befriends several other magical beings also searching for the mysterious town, including a sexy were-jackal who distracts her from locating the man of her proverbial dreams. However, when the group finds the city, it’s filled with dangerous magic and a barbaric were-pack. Facing these new troubles, will Amina take down her human pursuers and save the other paranormals she left behind or end up in greater peril?

For transparency purposes, I received a free audiobook copy of Mystic Bonds.

That being said, I wanted to like this book. It had everything that I normally like. Dystopian, magical powers, love triangles. Sadly, it didn’t quite deliver. The premise was great, but the further I got into it, it felt like a cheap knock off of Alexandra Bracken’s The Darkest Minds. This book was supposed to be in the New Adult genre, but it felt very YA.

Also, I’m not much of an audiobook person. I find it hard to focus on the story at times, but I really gave this one a good try. I don’t think the issue is the audiobook, I think it’s the writing. Honestly, if you’ve read The Darkest Minds, this one truly feels like a knock off, and I hate feeling that way because this is an indie author.

Firstly, this story is almost all tell. I don’t ever get to the point where I feel the characters’ emotions or get fully wrapped into the story. There are very few descriptions of places, so I quite often felt like they were in a black box.

Secondly, this definitely falls into the YA trope of reluctant chosen one. While I don’t hate the trope, I definitely expected to see a new twist on it, but I didn’t get it. The main character has all of these powers, but we know very little of them. They seem to be randomly given to the character. One power is mind control, another is shooting fire. I just didn’t understand how the magic system worked at all.

Because of my low rating, I won’t be posting this review on goodreads out of respect for the author, but if you’re looking for a dystopian story with magical elements: read The Darkest Minds. Alex Bracken is one of my favorite authors.

Sadly, I cannot recommend this story.

Rating: 1 out of 5.

Thanks for reading,
Abbie

Book Review

Book Review: Hang the Moon by Alexandria Bellefleur

In a delightful follow-up to Written in the Stars, Alexandria Bellefleur delivers another #ownvoices queer rom-com about a hopeless romantic who vows to show his childhood crush that romance isn’t dead by recreating iconic dates from his favorite films…

Brendon Lowell loves love. It’s why he created a dating app to help people find their one true pairing and why he’s convinced “the one” is out there, even if he hasn’t met her yet. Or… has he? When his sister’s best friend turns up in Seattle unexpectedly, Brendon jumps at the chance to hang out with her. He’s crushed on Annie since they were kids, and the stars have finally aligned, putting them in the same city at the same time.

Annie booked a spur-of-the-moment trip to Seattle to spend time with friends before moving across the globe. She’s not looking for love, especially with her best friend’s brother. Annie remembers Brendon as a sweet, dorky kid. Except, the 6-foot-4 man who shows up at her door is a certified Hot Nerd and Annie… wants him? Oh yes.

Getting involved would be a terrible idea—her stay is temporary and he wants forever—but when Brendon learns Annie has given up on dating, he’s determined to prove that romance is real. Taking cues from his favorite rom-coms, Brendon plans to woo her with elaborate dates straight out of Nora Ephron’s playbook. The clock is ticking on Annie’s time in Seattle, and Brendon’s starting to realize romance isn’t just flowers and chocolate. But maybe real love doesn’t need to be as perfect as the movies… as long as you think your partner hung the moon.

So, I loved Written in the Stars by Alexandria Bellefleur. It is a sapphic retelling of Pride & Prejudice full of some of the most fun tropes in romance. Enemies to Lovers? Check! Fake dating? Check! Cheekily named characters that are straight from classic literature? Check!

I love Bellefleur’s writing style and how each and every single one of her characters has a unique voice. After I finished Written in the Stars, I learned that she was publishing Hang the Moon, a sort of sequel. It involves the same characters, but it’s actually Darcy’s brother’s love story.

Firstly, I’d love to point out that Bellefleur’s LGBT+ representation is always spot on! Annie is a bisexual woman, and one thing we tend to see in stories where a bisexual (pansexual, etc.) character is in a hetero-passing relationship, so essentially their sexuality is erased. That is not the case in Hang the Moon! Annie is an openly queer woman who just so happens to like a CIS-het white male character.

Secondly, Bellefleur has such a fresh voice and take on typical romance tropes. She basically took the plot of The Taming of the Shrew but made it romantic. Where 10 Things I Hate About You was all about making bets and stuff in order to woo the closed off seemingly-bitter in love character, Hang the Moon frames Brendan’s attempts to convince Annie that love is worth it by actually showing her love and affection. Brendan is a hopeless romantic, and it is so refreshing to see a male character in a romance novel who believes in love and grand gestures and all of that.

By the time I got to the steamy bits, I was madly in love with both of these characters. Yet again, Bellefleur has knocked it out of the park. If you’re looking for a wonderful contemporary romance, this is definitely a must read!

The third novel in this series, Count Your Lucky Stars releases in February of 2022, and stars yet another member of this friend group–Margot! I can’t wait to read it!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Thanks for reading,
Abbie

Book Review

Book Review: These Witches Don’t Burn by Isabel Sterling

Hannah’s a witch, but not the kind you’re thinking of. She’s the real deal, an Elemental with the power to control fire, earth, water, and air. But even though she lives in Salem, Massachusetts, her magic is a secret she has to keep to herself. If she’s ever caught using it in front of a Reg (read: non-witch), she could lose it. For good. So, Hannah spends most of her time avoiding her ex-girlfriend (and fellow Elemental Witch) Veronica, hanging out with her best friend, and working at the Fly by Night Cauldron selling candles and crystals to tourists, goths, and local Wiccans.

But dealing with her ex is the least of Hannah’s concerns when a terrifying blood ritual interrupts the end-of-school-year bonfire. Evidence of dark magic begins to appear all over Salem, and Hannah’s sure it’s the work of a deadly Blood Witch. The issue is, her coven is less than convinced, forcing Hannah to team up with the last person she wants to see: Veronica.

While the pair attempt to smoke out the Blood Witch at a house party, Hannah meets Morgan, a cute new ballerina in town. But trying to date amid a supernatural crisis is easier said than done, and Hannah will have to test the limits of her power if she’s going to save her coven and get the girl, especially when the attacks on Salem’s witches become deadlier by the day.

Isabel Sterling’s delightful, suspenseful debut is equal parts sweet romance and thrilling mystery. With everything she loves on the line, Hannah must confront this murderous villain before her coven–and any chance she has with the new girl–is destroyed.

One of my favorite things in the entire world is witches. I was raised watching Charmed and being obsessed with the Salem Witch Trials. I think that The Covenant is one of the most underrated films of all time. One of the series I’m working on is centered on witches in New Orleans. So, to no one’s surprise, when These Witches Don’t Burn crossed my social feed, I just had to get my hands on it.

The witches were what got my attention, but the LGBT+ elements were what made me know I had to read it. There are so few LGBT+ YA novels out there that don’t center on coming out. I know that coming out is really important to capture, especially for young adults that don’t quite know where they stand on the LGBT spectrum. However, it’s refreshing when that isn’t the main story.

These Witches Don’t Burn is a refreshing story about Hannah, a young witch fresh out of a breakup with her first girlfriend, on the cusp of adulthood. Mix in mysterious elements like Blood Witches and Witch Hunters, magical powers, new love, and exploring a world in which you have to hide your magic, I was sold.

Because I read so much, the twist didn’t really surprise me, but I was pleasantly surprised by who the true villain was.

I won’t give a lot of plot away, but just know that this story has a lot of heart. It is the first in a series, and I really enjoyed reading it. I haven’t been reading a lot of YA lately, so this was a refreshing read. If you’re looking for something with positive LGBT+ representation and a lot of magic, definitely be sure to check this one out!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Thanks for reading,
Abbie

Book Review

Book Review: The Crown of Gilded Bones by Jennifer L. Armentrout

She’s been the victim and the survivor…

Poppy never dreamed she would find the love she’s found with Prince Casteel. She wants to revel in her happiness but first they must free his brother and find hers. It’s a dangerous mission and one with far-reaching consequences neither dreamed of. Because Poppy is the Chosen, the Blessed. The true ruler of Atlantia. She carries the blood of the King of Gods within her. By right the crown and the kingdom are hers.

The enemy and the warrior…

Poppy has only ever wanted to control her own life, not the lives of others, but now she must choose to either forsake her birthright or seize the gilded crown and become the Queen of Flesh and Fire. But as the kingdoms’ dark sins and blood-drenched secrets finally unravel, a long-forgotten power rises to pose a genuine threat. And they will stop at nothing to ensure that the crown never sits upon Poppy’s head.

A lover and heartmate…

But the greatest threat to them and to Atlantia is what awaits in the far west, where the Queen of Blood and Ash has her own plans, ones she has waited hundreds of years to carry out. Poppy and Casteel must consider the impossible—travel to the Lands of the Gods and wake the King himself. And as shocking secrets and the harshest betrayals come to light, and enemies emerge to threaten everything Poppy and Casteel have fought for, they will discover just how far they are willing to go for their people—and each other.

And now she will become Queen…

I have to admit, ever since reading the A Court of Thorns and Roses series, I’ve been a sucker for Fantasy Romance. The Crown of Gilded Bones is the third of the Blood and Ash series by Jennifer L. Armentrout. You can check out my original review here. I’ll admit, I originally rated the first book a 3.5. I intended on doing a review for the second in the series, Kingdom of Flesh and Fire, but I never got around to it.

Out of all of the Fantasy Romance novels I’ve read since first reading this series, this is one of the best. Not only does she tie in amazing fantastical elements, but the heat is spot on. In any good romance, you want something to keep you hooked in, which can be difficult, especially when a couple has been together since the first book in the series. Armentrout is able to keep the heat alive between Casteel and Poppy and even steps it up a notch in The Crown of Gilded Bones.

My only complaint is that it felt like too much and yet nothing at all was happening plot wise, if that makes sense. I’ve found through this series that Armentrout has a habit of building, building, building, and then BAM, plot, the end. That did not change in this book.

That being said, if you love fantasy romance, definitely check out this series. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Armentrout is an amazing romance author. I just recently found out that her Wicked series is being turned into a TV show and that the story is set in New Orleans, so I ordered a copy!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Thanks for reading,
Abbie

Book Review

April Book Reviews

I didn’t get to read nearly as much in April as I did in the prior three months, but there’s a good reason! During the month of April, we went on our writer’s retreat and have knocked out almost the entire zero draft of the sequel to Guns & Smoke!

Queen of Nothing by Holly Black

I’ve heard a lot of praise for Holly Black’s Cruel Prince series. For a lot of people, it is the slow burn enemies to lovers story, and I completely see that.

I enjoyed the first two books, but I wasn’t sucked into them wanting to know exactly what was going to happen next. I finally figured out why whenever I started reading Queen of Nothing: Jude had emotions.

In Cruel Prince and Wicked King, Jude was kind of an unlikeable character. She was so intense all of the time, and the only time we saw her break down was when she was around Cardan. Because Cardan made her feel things.

I loved Queen of Nothing. My only complaint is that it was Young Adult. I really wanted to see this story but in the Adult genre, because there’s just something about the tension, the anger, the hatred, the attraction… Yeah. Give me a slow burn, but make me want it so bad by the end of it. Because of the YA constraints, I was slightly disappointed, but it was great as a YA novel.

All in all, if you’re looking for a good story with a really well done world, interesting protagonists (and villians), definitely check out this series! I haven’t read anything from Holly except for this, but I would definitely return to read more.

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Seabird by Shawna Barnett

I received an ARC of Seabird through TikTok. This was pitched as the prequel to a sapphic pirate romance story, so I was immediately in!

Given that it’s a prequel novella, I knew that it wouldnt be a super long story but I found myself wanting more! The main character left me with a lot of questions about what’s to come in Windfall later this year.

Seabird was definitely a sweet discovery story for a young woman who is trying to figure out who she is in a world that she doesn’t fit in. There were a lot of details in the story about the main character that hinted at what I believe the bigger series will be about. Liana experienced an unexpected whirlwind romance over a summer when she was free and young. Though the climax of the story and the ending happened very suddenly, I feel as though there is a lot more to the story. I will definitely be checking out Windfall. I need all of the sapphic stories. F/F romance and pirates? Heck. Yes!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Flames of Chaos by Amelia Hutchins

I heard that Flames of Chaos was the next good read in the Dark Fantasy genre. Folks said it was better than Den of Vipers (as far as all of the consent stuff) and a really well done story.

I DNF’d at 33%.

First. There were tons of rapey consent issues. Secondly, it was all showing and no telling. I want to read about magic and mayhem and the steamy stuff. And yet… “I whispered a spell.” What’s the spell?

The first time she sees the love interest, she itches. You’re not supposed to itch when you meet the love interest. Just my thoughts.

Anyway, I’m tired of reading problematic books. And I’m going to continue writing consent in all of my own. Consent is important. Consent is sexy.

Rating: 0.5 out of 5.

I spent a good part of the month beta reading a manuscript for a friend on TikTok, which is why my number was low this month. But! She really appreciated my feedback and that made not getting to read as much worth it. 🙂

Happy May, y’all!
Abbie

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March Book Reviews

Yall. I set a goal of only 30 books this year because I wanted to really focus on my writing. I’m already up to 20 and it’s only April!! Anyways, on to what I read in March!

Ten Steps to Hero: How to Craft a Kickass Protagonist by Sacha Black

Are you fed up of one-dimensional heroes? Frustrated with creating clones? Does your protagonist fail to capture your reader’s heart?
In 10 Steps To Hero, you’ll discover:
How to develop a killer character arc
A step-by-step guide to creating your hero from initial concept to final page
Why the web of story connectivity is essential to crafting a hero that will hook readers
The four major pitfalls to avoid as well as the tropes your story needs
Finally, there is a comprehensive writing guide to help you create your perfect protagonist. Whether you’re writing your first story or you’re a professional writer, this book will help supercharge your hero and give them that extra edge.
These lessons will help you master your charming knights, navigate your way to the perfect balance of flaws and traits, as well as strengthen your hero to give your story the conflict and punch it needs.
First, there were villains, now there are heroes. If you like dark humor, learning through examples,and want to create the best hero you can, then you’ll love Sacha Black’s guide to crafting heroes.

Seriously, y’all, I cannot get enough of Sacha Black’s craft books.

First, I read the Anatomy of Prose, which I loved. Then, I read her Villians book which helped me figure out my villian issues. And now I’ve read her Heroes book.

Overall, it was a great book with a lot of really good insight and tips for how to craft a well rounded hero. While I didn’t read this because I needed the help, I fully intend on reading every one of her craft books time and time again.

I honestly don’t have much more to say that I haven’t already in my reviews of her other two. If you’re looking for kickass craft books, please check out Sacha Black.

She. is. awesome.

I’ve also just recently started listening to her Rebel Author podcast, and I am learning lots of little tips and tricks.

Enjoy!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Kian’s Focus by Misty Walker

I lost my boyfriend on the night I had planned to propose.
It was a horrific accident that was all my fault.
I gave up and resigned myself into a life of obscurity.
Until I got a call that my sister, Sara, needed me.
It gave me purpose and I ran to her rescue.
Because that’s what I’ve done our whole lives.
That’s how I ended up in Brigs Ferry Bay.
But when I showed up, things were so much worse than I thought.
She was sullen, fragile, and sinking into a depression I didn’t know how I’d get her out of.
Together, we were drowning.
Until I met Kian.
He’s everything I’m not.
Bouncy, bubbly, full of life, and an innate ability to make everything better.
He makes me believe I can be happy again.
Now the unthinkable has happened and Sara is on the verge of losing her life.
Once again, it’s all my fault.
Kian had clouded my vision with promises of hope and forever.
I was so stupid to believe I could be happy again.
I try push him away.
To shove him out of the darkness that follows me.
I don’t want him to suffer the future fate had secured me to.
But Kian’s focus is on me
And he’s used to getting what he wants.

I won an ARC (Advanced Reader’s Copy) of Kian’s Focus from Misty on TikTok!

First off, let me just say, she is super sweet and super insightful about indie publishing, especially when it comes to publishing romances.

On to the review! The only other M/M romance I have read is Red, White & Royal Blue, so I was really excited to dive into the world Misty created. From the get-go, the story was engaging and the characters were interesting.

Archer is a little down on his luck. Who wouldn’t be after the person they planned to spend the rest of their life with died in a tragic accident? The story starts about a year later, when he’s moved to live with his sister and help her out with her children. That always endears me to character. I love slightly clueless men who have hearts of gold.

Kian is confident, kind, and has his own issues, but he genuinely cares about every single soul that enters his life–or his bar/club.

When the two of them meet, there’s an instant spark and an undeniable chemistry. Even though Archer doesn’t think he deserves to get out there again, he takes a chance, and that’s one thing that I always love in a story.

I love how Misty captured that small town feel. I grew up in a small town in southern Louisiana, where everybody knows everybody’s business. It was fun to relive that in a different setting, and to watch love blossom between the two main characters. It was a genuine, heartfelt story of two men who each have their own shit, but somehow defy the odds and make it work.

I think the thing that I loved the most is how realistic it was. This story didn’t involve tons of over the top drama, but what it did was incredibly realistic.

Archer’s sister Sara is struggling with some major issues with her mental health, and I really appreciated that Misty didn’t shy away from that. When people get uncomfortable, sometimes they walk around real issues, but she did not. All in all, I really enjoyed this story. If you’re looking for a M/M romance, definitely check Misty out!

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Lore by Alexandra Bracken

Every seven years, the Agon begins. As punishment for a past rebellion, nine Greek gods are forced to walk the earth as mortals, hunted by the descendants of ancient bloodlines, all eager to kill a god and seize their divine power and immortality.
Long ago, Lore Perseous fled that brutal world in the wake of her family’s sadistic murder by a rival line, turning her back on the hunt’s promises of eternal glory. For years she’s pushed away any thought of revenge against the man–now a god–responsible for their deaths.
Yet as the next hunt dawns over New York City, two participants seek out her help: Castor, a childhood friend of Lore believed long dead, and a gravely wounded Athena, among the last of the original gods.

The goddess offers an alliance against their mutual enemy and, at last, a way for Lore to leave the Agon behind forever. But Lore’s decision to bind her fate to Athena’s and rejoin the hunt will come at a deadly cost–and still may not be enough to stop the rise of a new god with the power to bring humanity to its knees..

If you know me at all, you know I am a total fangirl for Alexandra Bracken. I own a copy of literally every book she’s ever published. I’m even lucky enough to have signed and personalized books by her.

I. Am. A. Fan.

So, it’s been a while since she’s released anything new. I’ve been following her on social media, and when she started talking about Lore a couple of years ago, I was really excited. Greek Gods. Urban fantasy. That is totally my jam.

The book released in January and I had every intention of reading it when it first came out. But, life.

As a side note, I like to read hard copies of books in conjunction with the ebook. If the ebook takes a while to come available, I’ll delay reading it. That was part of why it took me so long.

So. Yet again. Alex Bracken. I adore her.

While I’ve been trying to venture out of the YA genre a little bit more because my own books have more adult themes, I will always come back for one of her books. Alex has this way of making characters intriguing, but not giving anything away until it’s absolutely necessary, so it keeps you hooked.

I also loved that as time has gone on, Alex has grown as a writer and includes more obvious diverse representation. She is an amazing person, and I genuinely would love to be her best friend.

BUT since that won’t happen. If you like Greek Gods, magic, mysteries, and smoking hot god-like mystery boys, please check this out. You will NOT be disappointed. While I wasn’t hooked in the first chapter, the second one definitely sucked me in and I finished the book within a few days. I would love to see if Alex returns to this world, but based on the way the story ended, I don’t think she will. Either way, I’ll always be waiting for her next project. 🙂

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor

Around the world, black handprints are appearing on doorways, scorched there by winged strangers who have crept through a slit in the sky.
In a dark and dusty shop, a devil’s supply of human teeth grown dangerously low.
And in the tangled lanes of Prague, a young art student is about to be caught up in a brutal otherworldly war.
Meet Karou. She fills her sketchbooks with monsters that may or may not be real; she’s prone to disappearing on mysterious “errands”; she speaks many languages–not all of them human; and her bright blue hair actually grows out of her head that color. Who is she? That is the question that haunts her, and she’s about to find out.
When one of the strangers–beautiful, haunted Akiva–fixes his fire-colored eyes on her in an alley in Marrakesh, the result is blood and starlight, secrets unveiled, and a star-crossed love whose roots drink deep of a violent past. But will Karou live to regret learning the truth about herself?

A while back, I asked some of my author friends for suggestions of Fantasy Romance stories like From Blood and Ash and A Court of Mists and Fury. While the person who suggested this one admitted to not having read those two, they suggested this book.

When I researched it, I realized it didn’t quite fit the genre that I was looking for, but I was running a little low on other things so I decided to check it out from the library.

I was so pleasantly surprised. Not only is the writing amazing (and makes me want to go to Prague ASAP), but the story is intriguing. I’d heard that stories about angels were definitely not selling in the traditional market, so I was completely into it when I found a traditionally published story that was.

Overall, I enjoyed the first half more than the second half. The second half was a collection of memories, and while they were good, I don’t really like a giant info dump like that.

To put my thoughts simply: this is the first book in what is obviously a series, but it didn’t quite have the arc of a story that’s the first in a series. I almost felt like this should have been a prequel.

Parts of it were a little predictable, and the insta-love wasn’t my favorite (though it was explained and I was less salty about it after that).

Now, obviously, the ending left me a little dissatisfied, so I’m going to continue the series, but I’ll probably wait a while before I picked up the second one. This didn’t quite fit the recommendation I asked for, but I was very pleasantly surprised. I would have liked to see this in the Adult genre rather than the YA genre. I have a feeling Laini Taylor may take it there. If you’re looking for a good YA fantasy, definitely check it out!

Rating: 4 out of 5.

It’s Been a Pleasure, Noni Blake by Claire Christian

A sparkling, feel-good tale about starting over, for anyone who’s spent too much of their own life making other people happy.

What if you made yourself your number one priority?


Of all the women and men Noni Blake has pleased in her life, there’s one she’s often overlooked—herself. After the end of a decade-long relationship, Noni decides it’s time for that to change. She’s finally going to prioritize her wants and desires and only do things (and people) that feel good in the moment.

As she embarks on a pleasure-seeking quest that takes her halfway around the world, she discovers that maybe she can have everything, and everyone, she’s ever wanted.

Effortlessly hilarious and relatable, Claire Christian spins a fresh, uplifting story about starting over as a thirtysomething woman who’s been living life for everyone else. A story of self-discovery for the ages, Noni’s journey serves as a reminder that life is what we make of it—so why not enjoy it?

A friend of mine on social media posting a rave review of this book, and I knew I had to read it. It had all of the things I wanted:

Plus size Protagonist? Check!

Bisexual Representation? Check!

Early-Mid-Life Crisis? Check!

I wasn’t sure of the exact genre, but I quickly discovered that this was a women’s fiction novel.

One thing that I absolutely loved is that it starts showing the main character waking up after a night of drunken sex with someone she doesn’t know, and it’s a female firefighter.

Not long after, something sparks a fire in Noni and she decides to go to Europe. She wants to check off as many names on the “Should Have Banged” list, and she gets started on it before she ever leaves Australia.

What followed was a whimsical, silly, and sometimes just plain ridiculous (in a funny way) story of a woman in her mid-thirties trying to figure out exactly what she wants out of life. I really enjoyed it. It was hilarious and relatable (who hasn’t woken up one day and looked at themselves and said…wtf am I doing?)

I related to Noni on such a deep level. I think as women we often fall prey to living for others instead of living for ourselves. I know I did, until I went to therapy.

Overall, I really enjoyed the story. I almost wish it would have been a romance because y’all. There is a Viking in this story. He is big, beautiful, and a tattoo artist, and I wanted to see some heat between them. It wasn’t completely lacking, but it definitely wasn’t on par with some of the other stories I’ve been reading lately.

If you’re looking for a story that’s light, uplifting, will make you laugh and also dream of running off to Europe to find yourself, definitely check this one out.

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Den of Vipers by K.A. Knight

Ryder, Garrett, Kenzo, and Diesel—The Vipers.
They run this town and everyone in it. Their deals are as sordid as their business, and their reputation is enough to bring a grown man to his knees, forcing him to beg for mercy. They are not people you mess with, yet my dad did. The old man ran up a debt with them and then sold me to cover his losses.
Yes, sold me.
They own me now.
I’m theirs in every sense of the word. But I’ve never been meek and compliant. These men, they look at me with longing. Their scarred, blood-stained hands holding me tight. They want everything I am, everything I have to give, and won’t stop until they get just that. They can own my body, but they will never have my heart.
The Vipers? I’m going to make them regret the day they took me.
This girl? She bites too.

I’m not giving this book another second of my time, so here’s the review I posted on Goodreads and Amazon: I wanted to like this book. I’ve heard rave reviews all over the place. The first two hundred or so pages were full of consent issues, but I was willing to suspend my belief a little extra as this is an indie author. But then Diesel stuck something that doesnt go in a body in an exit and I was immediately cold.

The problem in reverse harems is that there can’t quite be chemistry with all of them. Three of the relationships felt forced AF. Carve out Garrett’s story from the rest and I would have liked this. As it is, there is NO talk about consent. I’m not here to kink shame, so please don’t mistake my feelings for this. My understanding in the kink community is that consent and comfort is a HUGE thing. Safe words, conversations about limits, how to do things SANITARILY… all big things. This book was one big, fucked up orgy.

The content itself is a nightmare, but that’s not all.

I found so many little errors in formatting, grammar, and spelling. The first page of each chapter was hard to read and the author left randomly hanging sentences all over the place. There were even sections where a few words were repeated. I wonder if they even had someone proofread the work before publication. With such a strong, beautiful cover, I thought for sure the author would have invested in the content the same way. In the later chapters, instead of each chapter equaling one character, the author starts head hopping without any rhyme or reason. If the specific scenes were actually connected, sure, but they weren’t.

I skimmed the last 30 pages because I was done. This book is trash, the writing is trash, and I just don’t get the hype. (0/5 Stars)

Rating: 1 out of 5.

Darkfever by Karen Marie Moning

MacKayla Lane’s life is good. She has great friends, a decent job, and a car that breaks down only every other week or so. In other words, she’s your perfectly ordinary twenty-first-century woman. Or so she thinks . . . until something extraordinary happens.
When her sister is murdered, leaving a single clue to her death–a cryptic message on Mac’s cell phone—Mac journeys to Ireland in search of answers. The quest to find her sister’s killer draws her into a shadowy realm where nothing is as it seems, where good and evil wear the same treacherously seductive mask. She is soon faced with an even greater challenge: staying alive long enough to learn how to handle a power she had no idea she possessed—a gift that allows her to see beyond the world of man, into the dangerous realm of the Fae. . . .
As Mac delves deeper into the mystery of her sister’s death, her every move is shadowed by the dark, mysterious Jericho, a man with no past and only mockery for a future. As she begins to close in on the truth, the ruthless Vlane—an alpha Fae who makes sex an addiction for human women–closes in on her. And as the boundary between worlds begins to crumble, Mac’s true mission becomes clear: find the elusive Sinsar Dubh before someone else claims the all-powerful Dark Book—because whoever gets to it first holds nothing less than complete control of the very fabric of both worlds in their hands. . . .

This is another novel someone suggested in response to my call for Adult Fantasy books. Again, not quite what I was asking for, but…it’s fine.

This is apparently a very popular series. I’d never heard of it before, so I wasn’t sure what I was getting into.

Clearly, it’s not a high fantasy story. Instead, it’s a paranormal romance novel.

It’s soooo slow to start. The story takes forever to build up even though the hook is interesting–the main character’s sister is in Ireland and she’s dead! But once the MC gets to Ireland, there’s all of this secrecy and creepy shit. And a weird 30 something bookseller who acts like he’s about 54, yet he’s oddly sexy and rich as hell.

I’m a little salty about this book because I don’t appreciate it when an author insults my entire generation based on a stereotype. Especially whenever the audience you’re writing for IS that generation. I even looked up to see and, YEP, she’s a Boomer, but whatever. Go ahead and talk about how self involved we are and how the MC is just not because she doesn’t get wrapped up in her cell phone and the like. Please. Based on this alone, I wouldn’t read another of her books.

That said. The story itself is boring. The author spends so much time telling us about conversations that happen in between the scenes she actually shows us. And they’re important damn scenes too.

There really wasn’t an ending to the story. It really felt like everything was happening to the main character instead of her actively making decisions to engage in the world around her.

It was better than Den of Vipers, at least there wasn’t anything going where it shouldn’t. But…no. I just didn’t like it. I won’t read another one because by the time I reached halfway, I was just over it and reading it to finish since someone did suggest this to me.

If any of you have read this series, please let me know if you disagree with me. I just was not engaged in this story at all.

Rating: 2 out of 5.

Book Review

February Book Reviews

Information in a Nutshell: Business Tips and Taxes for Writers by Carol Topp

New for 2018, covers the new tax laws and a new section for bloggers. Are you a writer serious about making money and keeping it? Business Tips and Taxes for Writers takes the mystery out of the tax code and allows you to understand the business of being an author. You will learn:>The best business structure for writers>Special tax breaks for writers>Legitimate tax deductions>Writing as a ministry>Bloggers and record keeping musts>Simple and easy record keeping>Dealing with inventory and sales tax, and so much more! This informative book will help you keep your hard earned money and have the peace of mind associated with doing it correctly! 

As I am going to be self publishing a book this year, I wanted to try and get ahead so that next year, I don’t have any issues when it comes to the dreaded tax word. While I don’t usually read a lot of non-fiction, as a business owner in a sense, it’s important to be prepared for important things like taxes.

I ended up skipping chunks of the book that didn’t really apply to my situation. It gave me a little more information than what I knew before, which is a great thing, as far as what forms to file and the types of things that can be considered tax deductions.

For the size of the book, I found it to be slightly overpriced, but I understand that it takes money to make books. This one will be going on my resource shelf. Before I read this, I already started compiling receipts and other important things so that I could file properly next year.

Obviously, the best place to go with tax questions and concerns is a CPA, and I fully intend on doing that next year. I can do my taxes for my day job, but this is something that I’m definitely not versed enough to do. Soooooo when Guns & Smoke comes out later this year, could you all buy a dozen copies so that I actually have income to report for 2021? 😀

Taxes are such a confusing thing, mainly because I feel like we should have had an “Adult Life Skills” class in high school. You know, taxes, basic information about loans (student loans are predatory AF), how to make a budget, how to save. These are all skills that I’ve had to pick up over the years. Instead of focusing on the Pythagorean theorem, maybe spend a little extra time teaching our students things they’ll actually need? Okay, rant over. Thanks for coming to my TED talk.

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Rebel Rose by Emma Theriault

Happily ever after is only the beginning as Belle takes on the responsibility of becoming queen and learns to balance duty, love, and sacrifice, all while navigating dark political intrigue—and a touch of magic.

It’s 1789 and France is on the brink of revolution. Belle has finally broken the Enchantress’s curse, restoring the Beast to his human form and bringing life back to their castle in the province of Aveyon. But in Paris, the fires of change are burning, and it’s only a matter of time before the rebellion arrives on their doorstep.

Not so very long ago, Belle dreamed of leaving her provincial home for a life of adventure. But now she finds herself living in a palace, torn between her past as a commoner, and her future as royalty. While Belle grapples with her newfound position, there are those who would do anything to keep her from power.

When she stumbles across a magic mirror that holds a dire warning, Belle wants nothing more than to ignore the mysterious voice calling her to accept a crown she never desired. But violent factions of the revolution may already be lurking within her own castle, and doing nothing would endanger everything she holds dear. With the fate of her country, her love, and her life at stake, Belle must decide if she is ready to embrace her own strength–and the magic that ties her to so many female rulers before her–to become the queen she is meant to be.

Rebel Rose is the first in the Queen’s Council series, an empowering fairy tale reimagining of the Disney Princesses-and the real history behind their stories-like you’ve never seen before. 

I’ve seen this book all over my social media pages lately, so I’ve wanted to read it, but it wasn’t totally a priority for me. I tend to read books in tandem with their e-books because it can be difficult to carry the hard copy around with me to work, the doctor’s etc.

Anyways. I won a copy of this book off of twitter, and once the ebook came available through the library, I ran for it!

First off, I would like to say that Beauty and the Beast is my second favorite Disney fairytale. I’ve always loved Belle. Her reprise is the single best song in any Disney movie.

I want adventure in the great, wide somewhere… I want it more than I can tell!

Like come on, how could any bookish person not want that?!

Anyways. I had no idea what the book was about before I started reading it. I’ll admit, I thought it was a retelling or a reimagining similar to A Curse So Dark and Lonely. Howeverrrrr… it was not. It was a direct continuation of Beauty and the Beast from the original Disney story, with bits that I feel were put in as a result of the Disney live action version (Gaston and returning from the war!). I really wanted to like it.

What we find is that the end of Beauty and the Beast is not all happily ever after.

Bella and Lio (the Beast. I thought he was Adam, but…?) are going to Paris to visit a cousin and indoctrinate themselves in with the French court. But the story starts around the time that King Louis and Marie Antionette are facing severe backlash from the commoners (which eventually leads to a lot of French royals losing their heads…hey revolution!).

I wanted to like this. I wanted to like it a lot. It is definitely a cute story about Belle and the Beast and what happens later. It’s very realistic because as French nobles, they would be faced with a lot of the historical issues facing France at the time.

For my tastes, to put it simply, there was too much of French politics and not enough romance! I need a book that has a good romantic storyline, one that makes me want to keep reading all of the way through and…this…just…wasn’t? It’s not a bad story. I think it has potential to be a very good series, but since the main character and her prince are already hooked up, where’s the romance? That’s just my opinion, honestly. If you don’t like romance and want to see what happened after the Happily Ever After, this just might be the story for you. For me, it wasn’t. I rated it three stars because I felt as though the story was really well written. I found myself getting caught up in the prose in ways I usually don’t in books. The author did a really wonderful job of writing the story. Three stars for me, but it might be something you like!

Rating: 3 out of 5.

The Anatomy of Prose by Sacha Black

Do your sentences fail to sound the way you want? Are they lackluster, with flat characters and settings? Is your prose full of bad habits and crutches?

In The Anatomy of Prose, you’ll discover: 

A step-by-step guide to creating descriptions that sing, The key to crafting character emotions that will hook a reader, How to harness all five senses to make your stories come alive, deepening your reader’s experience Tips and tricks for balancing details at the sentence level, Methods for strengthening each sentence through strategic word choice, rhythm and flow
Dozens of literary devices, and how to utilize them to give your prose power
Tactics for differentiating characters in dialogue as well as making it punchy and unforgettable, A comprehensive prose-specific self-editing check list, How to embody your character’s personality at the sentence level, The most common pitfalls and mistakes to avoid 

The Anatomy of Prose is a comprehensive writing guide that will help you create sensational sentences. Whether you’re just starting out or are a seasoned writer, this book will power up your prose, eliminate line-level distractions and help you find the perfect balance of show and tell. By the end of this book, you’ll know how to strengthen your sentences to give your story, prose and characters the extra sparkle they need to capture a reader’s heart.

If you like dark humor, learning through examples and want to create perfect prose, then you’ll love Sacha Black’s guide to crafting sensational sentences. Read The Anatomy of Prose today and start creating kick-ass stories.

Yay! Another craft book! I joined the Rebel Authors group on Facebook a while back. Sacha Black is one of the main admins, and a close friend recommended reading a couple of her craft books. So, here we are!

One thing I have struggled with is finding the right craft books. I’ve read some that I’ve hated (Anatomy of Story UGH), I really enjoy the ones that feel like the author is speaking right down into my soul. From the onset of the book, I appreciated that Black doesn’t shy away from swear words, and she is able to put her tips and advice in a coherent form that doesn’t feel stunted or like she’s talking down to you. From the first chapter, I knew that I would like this book.

While I won’t go into all of the details, because there is so much that she talks about, one of the early points she made is to become a better writer, you have to read. Not just read, but read with purpose. I’ve never thought about that before. She suggested that if you find something you really like in another story, mark it, save it, and analyze it later so you can decided why you like it, and how you can use that in your own writing. I read a lot. Most of the time, I just read for enjoyment, but after reading The Anatomy of Prose, I fully intend on reading with purpose.

Sacha has a line of craft books targeted at authors. I also purchased a copy of her villians book, and I can’t wait to get started on that one.

One thing I regret is that I didn’t plan properly when I started reading this so I could annotate and mark the book up when I found something that I liked. Not that I’m complaining, I will definitely be reading this again soon so that I can mark up the parts that really spoke to me. I hate actually writing in books, but I feel like this is one case where I can make an exception.

I’ve also been a member of Sacha’s Rebel Authors Facebook group. She does so much for the writing community, including a podcast. I can’t wait to start it! I have to finish catching up on five years of My Favorite Murder before I can take on another podcast, but I really cannot wait to get into the Rebel Authors podcast.

One thing you have to do is a writer is keep learning, keep pushing, keep writing. I love when I find a good craft book that doesn’t feel stuffy or that you’re being talked down to. I also love people that have a potty mouth like me, so I feel like Sacha and I would be great friends if given the chance. If you’re looking for a good book that gives you tips and tricks on how to be a better writer at the sentence level, definitely check this out! Don’t let the size of the book intimidate you. It is a very fast read (I read it basically over the course of a weekend), and Sacha has so many good things that every writer could learn from this book!

Rating: 5 out of 5.
This poetry collection captures the essence of early adulthood–the romantic and sexual relationships, the hopefulness, the despair, and the eventual self-acceptance. The tone shifts back and forth between romantic, angry, nostalgic, inspirational, and even humorous. With these poems, the author depicts all her failed attempts at love (with many boys, and one very special girl), while always trying to remain confident in the belief that who she is is, in fact, enough. These poems are for anyone who’s had their heart broken and managed to love again. And for anyone who’s just doing their best to navigate their way through this messy world.

I’ve been friends with Tammy for several years. When I saw that she was publishing a book of poetry, I knew I would have to buy it. I don’t usually read poetry, but I love supporting my friends. I purchased my copy last year right before the world went to hell. It sat on my dresser for months. I just couldn’t bring myself to pick it up.

Finally, when I was looking for something that didn’t require tons of hours of reading, I decided to read it, and I am really glad that I did.

Tammy and I are roughly the same age. I found a lot of her poems managed to capture the experience of a mid-2000s millennial like myself. She wrote about love and coffee and loneliness. There were so many poems throughout that I related to. It was almost like I could have written those words. What I love most is that she didn’t shy away from the hard stuff. The regret when you reach your thirties and you still aren’t married with children–even if it’s not something you’re sure you want, society still puts that pressure on you. I finished reading this in two sittings, and let me tell you, I walked away from it feeling a little less alone. It’s easy to sometimes get inside of your own head, especially when you think about all of the things you’re not or don’t have. I feel like I got to know my friend a little better. Poetry is a very different medium to novel writing. Of course it doesn’t take as much to devour the words, but I really felt like her poems struck me. I found myself nodding along with them, agreeing with them. I really love that she didn’t shy away from the hard stuff. If you’re looking for something that’s a lighter read, but also has plenty of mid-2000s references, talks about love and loss, sprinkled with some feministic thoughts, please pick up a copy!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

Whatever, Jerk by Nikki Paris

Dani
Danica Lynn Jepson is a failure. That’s right, I said it. I had my shot at life, and I failed. My fame is gone, my money is gone, and the stutter that I spent years in speech therapy trying to control is rearing its ugly head. I think my parents still like me, maybe my best friend, and sometimes my dog, but that’s it. One thing’s for sure; my sexy new neighbor can’t stand me. It’s fine, though, because he’s a jerk and the feeling is mutual.
Connor
Princess Dani is a brat. She and her pretty blonde hair and mind-numbing ass can just go back to wherever they came from. I don’t need her all up in my space, making me think about things I shouldn’t be thinking about. It’s my fault that I lost the love of my life two years ago, and I plan on living in my self-assigned purgatory for the next forever. And just so we’re clear, if I ever did decide to move on, it wouldn’t be with Dani.

I recently started using my TikTok account as an author platform. What’s really cool is all of the authors I’ve been able to connect with. I won a copy of this book from Nikki by interacting with her account.

While I would like to start with a disclaimer, I also want to be sure that I’m being honest. Disclaimer: contemporary romance isn’t my favorite genre. I enjoy romance of just about any kind, but I am especially looking for diverse romances in the contemporary sphere (interracial, LGBTQ+, etc.). That being said, Whatever, Jerk was a cute, quirky standard contemporary romance. The main characters, Dani and Connor, both annoyed the hell out of me in the beginning. That happens when characters are stubborn and in denial about attraction.

It took me a little bit to get into the story because I didn’t really like the main characters. Once Connor’s nephew, Marshall, was introduced, however, the story picked up. Maybe it’s because I have nephews and so a little piece of me melted when I saw how Connor behaved with his nephew as opposed to nearly everyone else in his life.

As a writer myself, it’s really easy to be critical of another’s writing. I found the story lacked when it came to showing and not telling. Most of the time, I felt like I was in a black box and I didn’t know anything about the scene around the characters. While I love what the author has done to create a brand for herself, I also would like to see more descriptions and more showing in her other stuff. That being said, props for indie publishing! Writing is hard, publishing is hard, and to have the confidence to do it takes a LOT. Mad respect for anyone who is an indie published author. While diverse stories were one thing I wanted to add to my reading list this year, I also wanted to add more indies! If you’re looking for a casual easy contemporary romance, be sure to check this out! I believe it’s on Kindle Unlimited, too!

Rating: 3 out of 5.

13 Steps to Evil: How to Craft Superbad Villains by Sacha Black

Your hero is not the most important character in your book. Your villain is.
 
Are you fed up of drowning in two-dimensional villains? Frustrated with creating clichés? And failing to get your reader to root for your villain?
  
In 13 Steps to Evil, you’ll discover: 
How to develop a villain’s mindset
A step-by-step guide to creating your villain from the ground up
Why getting to the core of a villain’s personality is essential to make them credible 
What pitfalls and clichés to avoid as well as the tropes your story needs
Finally, there is a comprehensive writing guide to help you create superbad villains. Whether you’re just starting out or are a seasoned writer, this book will help power up your bad guy and give them that extra edge.

These lessons will help you master and control your villainous minions, navigate and gain the perfect balance of good and evil, as well as strengthening your villain to give your story the tension and punch it needs.
 
If you like dark humour, learning through examples and want to create the best villains you can, then you’ll love Sacha Black’s guide to crafting superbad villains. Read 13 Steps to Evil today and start creating kick-ass villains.

I completed a project back in November for National Novel Writing Month.

From the time I finished, I knew that the villian in the story was weak. When I purchased Sacha Black’s Anatomy of a Story, I also purchased a copy of this book. I needed to figure out my villian’s purpose so I could then finish actually writing the story.

Once again, I love Sacha’s fresh voice and that she doesn’t shy away from slang and swear words. Her examples of villians in popular culture made it simpler for me to understand villian arcs. She also has a great section on anti-heroes.

Through reading Sacha’s craft books, I feel like I have a better understanding of creating characters and creating prose that is not only entertaining to read, but reads really well. I’ve also finally gotten started on the Rebel Authors podcast. While I’m only a few episodes in, I can already tell that it’s going to provide a lot of great resources for authors. You should definitely check it out.

While reading this book, I was able to give my villian their own arc and motivation. Their motivations were shakey at best in the original manuscript, but now they have a backstory and the right motivation. In taking the time to craft my villian, I’ve been able to add an extra layer to the story to make it believable and interesting to readers.

One thing I’ve always struggled with it finding craft books that read well and make sense. A lot of the popular craft books out there make me feel like I’m being talked down to. Sacha’s books are the complete opposite.

I feel as though I should do a post specifically on craft books for writers. I’ve been able to learn so much over the last six months or so about writing craft, story structure, and character building. I may do something like this in the future if anyone is interested.

All in all, if you’re looking for a craft book to help you with villians, anti-heroes, and antagonists, definitely check out Sacha’s Better Writers series.

Also, if you have suggestions on craft books you love, please drop them in the comments! I am absolutely looking for any and every resource that could help me be a better writer!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

The Wicked King by Holly Black

You must be strong enough to strike and strike and strike again without tiring.

The first lesson is to make yourself strong.

After the jaw-dropping revelation that Oak is the heir to Faerie, Jude must keep her younger brother safe. To do so, she has bound the wicked king, Cardan, to her, and made herself the power behind the throne. Navigating the constantly shifting political alliances of Faerie would be difficult enough if Cardan were easy to control. But he does everything in his power to humiliate and undermine her even as his fascination with her remains undiminished.

When it becomes all too clear that someone close to Jude means to betray her, threatening her own life and the lives of everyone she loves, Jude must uncover the traitor and fight her own complicated feelings for Cardan to maintain control as a mortal in a Faerie world.

So I liked the Cruel Prince, I didn’t quite love it. I’ve heard so much about the slow enemies to lovers romance, so I decided to stick it out and keep reading.

From the get go of this book, Jude is intense. Like, I really didn’t enjoy a lot of the stuff that she had to do from a political fae standpoint. I liked the push and pull between she and Cardan. I definitely enjoyed the heat between them (however few scenes of it there were). I didn’t really like the whole kidnapping plot. It felt a little unrealistic for me. I didn’t get why the water queen (whatever her name was lol) would immediately go for kidnapping Jude. I guess it’s because the one who betrayed her told them. BUT. They could have also told them about Jude’s control over Cardan. Maybe I missed it and that was something she didn’t share with her spies. I dunno.

Her sisters really annoy me. Vivi, I can somewhat understand her actions, but Taryn is annoying as all get out. I don’t understand her motivations. I don’t understand how you can literally share a womb with someone, grow up as their best friend and main confidante in a world where you’re not wanted, and betray them like Taryn betrayed Jude. Maybe it’s something that will be explored more in the third book, but it felt really unnatural for me.

Now. The Ending. I won’t post details here, but basically it was a twist boom bang like the first book in the series. It wasn’t necessarily bad. But it wasn’t necessarily good either. I have a tendency for softness when it comes to the ‘bad’ characters, so I’d like to believe that this character’s motivations are one thing, but then again, he’s a faerie and I just don’t know.

I’ll be reading the third one, simply to see how it all ends, but I’m not too sure about reading much else by this author. I wish this story lived up to the hype a little more. Maybe it’s because it’s YA, but the hype seems a little overdone based on what I’ve read so far. Maybe the last book will change my opinion.

Rating: 4 out of 5.

A Court of Silver Flames by Sarah J Maas

Nesta Archeron has always been prickly-proud, swift to anger, and slow to forgive. And ever since being forced into the Cauldron and becoming High Fae against her will, she’s struggled to find a place for herself within the strange, deadly world she inhabits. Worse, she can’t seem to move past the horrors of the war with Hybern and all she lost in it.

The one person who ignites her temper more than any other is Cassian, the battle-scarred warrior whose position in Rhysand and Feyre’s Night Court keeps him constantly in Nesta’s orbit. But her temper isn’t the only thing Cassian ignites. The fire between them is undeniable, and only burns hotter as they are forced into close quarters with each other.

Meanwhile, the treacherous human queens who returned to the Continent during the last war have forged a dangerous new alliance, threatening the fragile peace that has settled over the realms. And the key to halting them might very well rely on Cassian and Nesta facing their haunting pasts.

Against the sweeping backdrop of a world seared by war and plagued with uncertainty, Nesta and Cassian battle monsters from within and without as they search for acceptance-and healing-in each other’s arms.

This was my most anticipated read of 2021.

Warning: there are spoilers, so please do not read further if you haven’t finished ACOSF.

It’s been about two years since the novella, A Court of Frost and Starlight dropped, and it literally was just a tease into the next book.

Enter. Nessian.

The first time I read the ACOTAR series, I read it for Feyre and Rhysand. Their love story was incredible. I fell in love with it just like most of the rest of the world. The second time, I fell in love with Cassian. Cassian…and how he was with Nesta. I know a lot of folks out there hate Nesta. They didn’t see why she should get her own book. That’s the thing about well written characters: they have shades of gray, layers, and things hidden beneath the hard exterior that deserve to be delved into.

I am so glad that Sarah wrote this novel.

First off, she thicc. This book is 750 pages. And a lot of it is SMUT. And. I. Am. Here. For. It. I knew that Nesta and Cassian would be dirty. That did not disappoint. This book was everything that I wanted when it came to exploring Nesta: her trauma, her journey, her redemption. I adore her. I adored reading her perspective and seeing how she sees Cassian. I loved seeing the way she affected Cassian with simply a look. The two of them being locked together in the House of Wind was super fun.

That being said, there are a few things I had problems with.

First off, didn’t we cancel Tamlin for keeping Feyre essentially locked up and locked out? Isn’t that the same thing Rhysand did in this book? Come on, you can say all you want he was “trying to protect” her but if it was Tamlin doing this shit, everyone would be cancelling him all over again. I did not like this plot point. I didn’t like the *SPOILER* pregnancy plot point, but we knew it was coming based off of TOG and ACOFAS, plus Sarah was pregnant around the time she wrote this.

Secondly. Where was Mor? There’s been a lot of dialogue around Maas’s lack of diversity. She doesn’t have many POC characters (and even then, they’re side characters) and she has literally one main LGBTQ+ character. In ACOWAR, she revealed that Mor prefers females, which is why she never pursued Azriel. In ACOWAR, she told us through dialogue with Mor and Feyre that Mor preferred females. She didn’t show us. You can tell me all you want, I won’t believe it until I see it. (She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named saying Dumbledore is gay instead of showing it in the text is the same damn thing) That being said, Mor is barely in ACOSF. She’s absent so much that it feels like Sarah didn’t want to write her into this one. As if she were avoiding writing Mor. I was incredibly disappointed. Mor couldn’t have been doing that much in another territory to have such a small role in this book. And even when she was in the chapters, she wasn’t the Mor we already know. I have a feeling the next book will be Azriel. And if there isn’t more Mor, I dunno how I’m going to feel about it.

There were two bonus chapters in a couple of the editions of the books. If you haven’t read them, you may want to find them and read them if you don’t want spoilers.

The Feysand one was typical Feysand, I don’t have any comments or complaints. The Azriel one, however… I have some thoughts. Firstly, if Elain is interested in Az, great, let me see it, and then let’s go. But I feel like this is the only time there’s even been a glimpse of something between them other than him being protective of her. That being said, the argument between Rhysand and Az sort of pissed me off. Az’s comment about there being three of the Archeron sisters and three of Illyrians really made me bristle. He is not owed anything, and that’s how it felt to me. I’ve always liked Az. I almost wish I hadn’t read this bonus chapter because it gave me a bitter taste in my mouth about him. That being said, I really hope he and Gwyn have a romance. I’d love to see her be able to work through her trauma and for Az to have a happy ending. His shadow didn’t retreat from her. That has to mean something.

Alright. I thoroughly enjoyed ACOSF. I loved everything about it. I wish the mate moment had been bigger, but let’s be real, we all knew they were mates since before Nesta was even fae.

I can’t wait to see what Maas does next. Let’s hope she fixes some of her problematic stuff, because I hate seeing people fight about it.

Rating: 5 out of 5.

A Vow So Bold and Deadly by Brigid Kemmerer

Face your fears, fight the battle.
Emberfall is crumbling fast, torn between those who believe Rhen is the rightful prince and those who are eager to begin a new era under Grey, the true heir. Grey has agreed to wait two months before attacking Emberfall, and in that time, Rhen has turned away from everyone–even Harper, as she desperately tries to help him find a path to peace.

Fight the battle, save the kingdom.
Meanwhile, Lia Mara struggles to rule Syhl Shallow with a gentler hand than her mother. But after enjoying decades of peace once magic was driven out of their lands, some of her subjects are angry Lia Mara has an enchanted prince and a magical scraver by her side. As Grey’s deadline draws nearer, Lia Mara questions if she can be the queen her country needs.

As the two kingdoms come closer to conflict, loyalties are tested, love is threatened, and an old enemy resurfaces who could destroy them all, in this stunning conclusion to bestselling author Brigid Kemmerer’s Cursebreaker series.

Alright. So if you read my January reviews, you know I have thoughts about this series. That didn’t stop with the second book.

I wanted to like this. I was hoping after the disappointments I felt in the second book, that this one would turn things around.

Oh boy, was I wrong.

What did I like? Grey. Grey is the best character in this entire world. He is honorable and kind, but fierce and loyal when he has to be. I’ve loved Grey since the very first book. I always shipped he and Harper. When Harper remained behind and Grey left Emberfall, I was really upset. The two of them had this chemistry, but yet…she and Rhen? I’ve never bought the romance between Rhen and Harper. It didn’t feel natural to me in the first book. It didn’t feel natural to me all through the series.

I can’t stand Lia Mara. She is the most annoying character in the entire series, and I find it hard to believe that people would follow her. She and Grey’s romance is absolutely not believable. Again, I wish the author would have made her an ace character, so that Grey could still get a romance with Harper and an alliance with Syhl Shallow.

The best part about the ending was Rhen and Grey reconciling and showing their brotherly love for one another. But the rest of it left me feeling unsettled, like the story isn’t really over yet. I didn’t like where it ended. I wanted to feel for Rhen. I wanted to root for him by the end, but it almost feels like I got cheated.

All in all, this was a pretty depressing finale to this trilogy. It had good parts–don’t mistake me. If you’re looking for a story that’s well written in a fantasy world, please read it. I just have a bad taste in my mouth because it wasn’t a satisfactory ending to the series for me. I tend to be a little more critical of stories than most. A lot of people love the series. More power to them. The only way I’ll pick up something else from this author is if it has Grey in it. He’s perfect. But the rest of the characters are…not.

Rating: 3 out of 5.

As always, thanks for reading,
Abbie

Book Review

January Book Reviews

Since I read so much, it’s nearly impossible to write individual blogs on every single book. So beginning in 2021, I decided to compile a single blog post and include everything that I finished reading in the month. Here is what I read in January!

The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V.E. Schwab

A Life No One Will Remember. A Story You Will Never Forget.

France, 1714: in a moment of desperation, a young woman makes a Faustian bargain to live forever―and is cursed to be forgotten by everyone she meets.

Thus begins the extraordinary life of Addie LaRue, and a dazzling adventure that will play out across centuries and continents, across history and art, as a young woman learns how far she will go to leave her mark on the world.

But everything changes when, after nearly 300 years, Addie stumbles across a young man in a hidden bookstore and he remembers her name.

I don’t read contemporary or literary fiction that often. I tend to stick to the Fantasy genre mostly. However, this book kept popping up on all of my social media feeds. I saw reviews where readers said the story absolutely destroyed them. Every now and then, I want something that’s going to make me feel emotional and, dare I say it, make me cry. I wanted to cry for this, but it didn’t happen.

The structure of the story itself is a little jarring at first. The reader follows Addie LaRue in two separate timelines — starting in 1714 and 2014. The base premise of the story is that she makes a deal to get out of having to marry, but, as all sane people know, any sort of magic comes with a price. In exchange for getting her out of the deal, Luc’s magic causes everyone who has ever met and will ever meet to forget Addie. She is, quite literally, invisible. Until… she meets Henry. Their love story is actually incredibly sweet. I wish they’d spent more time in the details of the present day storyline instead of so much revisiting the past. Maybe I would have felt more emotional in the end. Would I recommend it? Sure, if you like an interesting contemporary story with some interesting twists.

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Where Dreams Descend by Janella Angeles

In a city covered in ice and ruin, a group of magicians face off in a daring game of magical feats to find the next headliner of the Conquering Circus, only to find themselves under the threat of an unseen danger striking behind the scenes.

As each act becomes more and more risky and the number of missing magicians piles up, three are forced to reckon with their secrets before the darkness comes for them next.

The Star: Kallia, a powerful showgirl out to prove she’s the best no matter the cost

The Master: Jack, the enigmatic keeper of the club, and more than one lie told

The Magician: Demarco, the brooding judge with a dark past he can no longer hide

Where Dreams Descend is the startling and romantic first book in Janella Angeles’ debut Kingdom of Cards fantasy duology where magic is both celebrated and feared, and no heart is left unscathed.

Over the last few years, I have lived for YA Fantasy. From THE RED QUEEN to ACOTAR, to THESE REBEL WAVES, YA Fantasy has been my jam. However, 2020 was a bit of a down year for me in reading. The majority of my normal authors didn’t have new releases. I ended up venturing away from the genre. WHERE DREAMS DESCEND was another book that kept popping up on my socials as a suggested read. To be honest, while the story was interesting and endearing, it felt almost as though the plotline wasn’t completely flushed out. And it left on a huge cliffhanger with literally no answers. A story at least needs to have some sort of resolution or wrap up. I believe the sequel novel to this one has already come out, but I was left with a bit of a bad taste in my mouth. I do like the circus theme, but I found the main characters to fall a little flat. I would have much preferred to follow the members of the Conquering Circus. If you like circus and magic themed stories, this might be one to consider. While it was lackluster compared to other YA Fantasy novels I read last year, I wouldn’t turn anyone away that wanted to read it.

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Written in the Stars by Alexandra Bellefleur

After a disastrous blind date, Darcy Lowell is desperate to stop her well-meaning brother from playing matchmaker ever again. Love—and the inevitable heartbreak—is the last thing she wants. So she fibs and says her latest set up was a success. Darcy doesn’t expect her lie to bite her in the ass.

Elle Jones, one of the astrologers behind the popular Twitter account Oh My Stars, dreams of finding her soul mate. But she knows it is most assuredly not Darcy… a no-nonsense stick-in-the-mud, who is way too analytical, punctual, and skeptical for someone as free-spirited as Elle. When Darcy’s brother—and Elle’s new business partner—expresses how happy he is that they hit it off, Elle is baffled. Was Darcy on the same date? Because… awkward.

Darcy begs Elle to play along and she agrees to pretend they’re dating. But with a few conditions: Darcy must help Elle navigate her own overbearing family during the holidays and their arrangement expires on New Year’s Eve. The last thing they expect is to develop real feelings during a faux relationship. But maybe opposites can attract when true love is written in the stars?

I write in the Adult Fantasy genre, mostly Romance, so I have invested a lot of time and energy into researching books in the genre. The biggest problem that I have is the lack of LGBTQ+ representation in the genre. This has led me to read more contemporary books (RED, WHITE, & ROYAL BLUE was an amazing M/M romance!!). I had no idea what WRITTEN IN THE STARS was about, but some of the reviews that I saw really spoke to my little pansexual heart. We need more stories about LGBTQ+ people where coming out isn’t the obstacle they have to overcome. This one was exactly that! A modern day spin on Pride & Prejudice, Bellefleur’s enemies-to-lovers F/F romance was a joy and a delight to read. She managed to hit way too close to home on some of my personal trauma issues, but that’s the point to literature! You want to make people feel something when they read, and I had alllll the feels when reading this! Darcy and Elle are the perfect example of opposites attract. This book made my little pansexual heart flutter!! I enjoyed this read immensely and look forward to anything further that Bellefleur writes!

Rating: 5 out of 5.

A Curse So Dark and Lonely by Brigid Kemmerer

Fall in love, break the curse.

It once seemed so easy to Prince Rhen, the heir to Emberfall. Cursed by a powerful enchantress to repeat the autumn of his eighteenth year over and over, he knew he could be saved if a girl fell for him. But that was before he learned that at the end of each autumn, he would turn into a vicious beast hell-bent on destruction. That was before he destroyed his castle, his family, and every last shred of hope.

Nothing has ever been easy for Harper. With her father long gone, her mother dying, and her brother barely holding their family together while constantly underestimating her because of her cerebral palsy, she learned to be tough enough to survive. But when she tries to save someone else on the streets of Washington, DC, she’s instead somehow sucked into Rhen’s cursed world.

Break the curse, save the kingdom.

A prince? A monster? A curse? Harper doesn’t know where she is or what to believe. But as she spends time with Rhen in this enchanted land, she begins to understand what’s at stake. And as Rhen realizes Harper is not just another girl to charm, his hope comes flooding back. But powerful forces are standing against Emberfall . . . and it will take more than a broken curse to save Harper, Rhen, and his people from utter ruin.

A friend recommended this book to me. I’ve seen it before, but never really looked into it. I added it to my Goodreads and Amazon book wish list. Surprise! I won a gift from an AuthorToker who would gift me something from my wish list. This was the book she chose!

Imagine my surprise when I started reading this book and found that the premise hooked me pretty quickly. I knew that this was a retelling of Beauty and the Beast. I didn’t expect it to be such a fresh, new perspective on the BATB storyline. You’ve got Harper, a badass female protagonist who gets sucked into an entirely different world against her will. Only to be faced with the fact that she is there to break a curse. She’s obsinate and stubborn, but so incredibly kind. We follow her journey in Emberfall, watch as she and the Prince learn how to work together to save his kingdom, and even entertain that there could be a love triangle between Harper, Prince Rhen and the Captain of the Guard Grey (Hellooooo Grey. I’ve had a thing for Captains of the Guard since THRONE OF GLASS heheh). I love that it followed the same basic premise as BATB, but it continued to add little elements and things that I absolutely adore. One of my favorite things about this one was that the MC had a disability-cerebral palsy. But it wasn’t something that held her back from being a badass! I definitely recommend this one if you’re looking for a fresh take on an old favorite, or if you’re just looking for a new YA Fantasy series to get into. I can’t wait to read the sequel!

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Cinderella is Dead by Kalynn Bayron

It’s 200 years after Cinderella found her prince, but the fairy tale is over. Teen girls are now required to appear at the Annual Ball, where the men of the kingdom select wives based on a girl’s display of finery. If a suitable match is not found, the girls not chosen are never heard from again.

Sixteen-year-old Sophia would much rather marry Erin, her childhood best friend, than parade in front of suitors. At the ball, Sophia makes the desperate decision to flee, and finds herself hiding in Cinderella’s mausoleum. There, she meets Constance, the last known descendant of Cinderella and her step sisters. Together they vow to bring down the king once and for all–and in the process, they learn that there’s more to Cinderella’s story than they ever knew . . .

This fresh take on a classic story will make readers question the tales they’ve been told, and root for girls to break down the constructs of the world around them.

This year, I promised myself that I would read more diverse books. I fell into the whirlpool that is the straight, CIS, white world of Fantasy stories. While I was researching LGBTQ+ stories, I came across this title. I saw many rave reviews, so I decided to add it. This story is a fresh take on Cinderella. It is full of brown queer girls set out to take down a terrible patriarchal society. I loved the fresh spin on the Cinderella fairy tale! Cinderella has always been my favorite fairy tale. In Lille, the story of Cinderella is the same as the one you and I know. Only, it’s a lie. The author explores what life would be like for women in Cinderella’s world 200 years after she died, and shows that happily ever after isn’t always what happens. I love fairytales. I took a foundations of children’s literature class in college as an elective, because I love it so much. Fairytales were created as cautionary tales for children, so I loved how this author took that same principle and applied it to this story. While personally, I wanted a little bit more action when it came to the climax, I still feel like it was a very well written story with badass, diverse women. If you’re looking for a good LGBTQ+ YA Fantasy story, this one is for you!

Rating: 4 out of 5.

A Heart So Fierce and Broken by Brigid Kemmerer

Find the heir, win the crown.
The curse is finally broken, but Prince Rhen of Emberfall faces darker troubles still. Rumors circulate that he is not the true heir and that forbidden magic has been unleashed in Emberfall. Although Rhen has Harper by his side, his guardsman Grey is missing, leaving more questions than answers.

Win the crown, save the kingdom.
Grey may be the heir, but he doesn’t want anyone to know his secret. On the run since he destroyed Lilith, he has no desire to challenge Rhen–until Karis Luran once again threatens to take Emberfall by force. Her own daughter Lia Mara sees the flaws in her mother’s violent plan, but can she convince Grey to stand against Rhen, even for the good of Emberfall?

The heart-pounding, compulsively readable saga continues as loyalties are tested and new love blooms in a kingdom on the brink of war.

I managed to get the sequel to A Curse So Dark and Lonely on Amazon for like $9! I love when I can get a good price for a book I was already going to buy. The last chapter of the original work left on a slight cliffhanger. Even I, queen of predicting plot twists, did not see this one coming. For those who want to read the first book, I won’t spoil it. However, this book follows Prince Rhen’s captain in the guard, who learned a very dangerous secret at the end of the first book. The sequel follows his journey to accept who he is and gives him a chance at love. When I read the first book, I totally shipped Grey and Harper. They had a little spark–one that I felt Rhen and Harper were missing. I truly wanted Harper and Grey to get together, and for Rhen and the magesmith who cursed him to become hardcore enemies to lovers. Sadly, that did not come to pass. Instead, we are introduced to a new character–the daughter of a neighboring queen, who stupidly gets herself captured and then escapes and then she and Grey become friends and eventually–dun dun dun–love interests. If Lia Mara had been a more interesting character, I wouldn’t have been so disappointed in this book. I ADORE Grey. He is such an incredible character. There were moments when reading that I had to pause because he’s such a great person, and he shows that characters have shades of gray (see what I did there, huh? :)). The story had a slightly predictable ending, and the final chapter did the same as the first: introduced a massive swinging plot twist! The third book in the series, A Vow So Bold and Deadly just came out, so once it’s available through the library, I will be reading it. Maybe Harper and Grey will end up together. One can only hope!

Rating: 3 out of 5.

I feel like I didn’t read as much in January as I normally do. I fill my mornings with reading before work while I drink my coffee, and I usually read when I’m doing cardio at the gym. January was incredibly busy because I got back developmental edits on Guns & Smoke and we spent the month working through them. We hired a copy/line editor, and had to get the manuscript cleaned up for today, February 1st!

All in all, it was a good reading month. I’m looking forward to the rest of my TBR list!

Thanks,
Abbie

Book Review

Book Review: From Blood and Ash by Jennifer L. Armentrout

As I begin my journey to writing more in the Romance and Fantasy genres, I decided to do some research on what was currently selling. FROM BLOOD AND ASH by Jennifer Armentrout kept popping up in my suggestions and on my TikTok feed. Everyone rated it HOT on the heat scale, so I was really excited to dive into it.

Let me preface this by saying I have not read a lot of romance. Most of the stories I read have romantic elements, but my knowledge of the romance genre in general is very limited. Because my NaNoWriMo project this year was an Adult Fantasy Romance, I did some digging to find books that were similar (medieval setting, magic, etc.) and landed on this one. There were a couple of others that I’ll review later as well. I have not read any contemporary romance, but I have written a Dystopian/Post Apocalyptic romance novel with a friend (and had a BLAST writing it).

Let’s begin, shall we?

Summary:

Captivating and action-packed, from Blood and Ash is a sexy, addictive, and unexpected fantasy perfect for fans of Sarah J. Maas and Laura Thalassa.

A MAIDEN…

Chosen from birth to usher in a new era, Poppy’s life has never been her own. The life of the Maiden is solitary. Never to be touched. Never to be looked upon. Never to be spoken to. Never to experience pleasure. Waiting for the day of her Ascension, she would rather be with the guards, fighting back the evil that took her family, than preparing to be found worthy by the gods. But the choice has never been hers.

A DUTY…

The entire kingdom’s future rests on Poppy’s shoulders, something she’s not even quite sure she wants for herself. Because a Maiden has a heart. And a soul. And longing. And when Hawke, a golden-eyed guard honor bound to ensure her Ascension, enters her life, destiny and duty become tangled with desire and need. He incites her anger, makes her question everything she believes in, and temps her with the forbidden.

A KINGDOM

Forsaken by the gods and feared by mortals, a fallen kingdom is rising once more, determined to take back what they believe is theirs through violence and vengeance. And as the shadow of those cursed draws closer, the line between what is forbidden and what is right becomes blurred. Poppy is not only on the verge of losing her heart and being found unworthy by the gods, but also her life when every blood-soaked thread that holds her world together begins to unravel. “

I was really excited to start this book. After the glowing reviews I read about it and all of the hype, I was expecting this book to blow my socks off. I was, sadly, disappointed. Not because I didn’t like the story, but because this was promoted as Fantasy Romance, when really it’s a Fantasy with romantic elements. There’s a scene early on where the heat is ON, but then it’s another four hundred pages before it comes again. In my opinion, a romance needs to keep that burn going low and steady, ramping up the heating from time to time, not leaving things to chance.

Quite literally, two-thirds of the book is world building and setting it up for a crazy third act, where pretty much everything happens at once. While I am not an expert on romance, there are many things I would have chosen to do differently if given this storyline to work with.

Given that Armentrout is a largely successful writer in the romance sphere, I’m not surprised that this was marketed as a romance.

The love interest, Hawke–bad boy with a wicked grin and mysterious past–is the reason I ended up reading the second book in the series, A KINGDOM OF FLESH AND FIRE. Hawke shows up early on in FROM BLOOD AND ASH and he is everything we love in a bad boy. Tall, handsome, badass with a sword, and fiercely protective of the main character with *issues*. (Reminded me of Rhysand from ACOTAR, but not nearly as good :))

The main character is a strong young woman–we love a badass female protagonist–who has been sheltered but begins to grow and learn and find out who she truly is, only to have the world turned upside down. There is a big twist toward the end, followed by some hate-sex (which, in my opinion, was pretty toxic, but readers seemed to love it though I didn’t).

One thing I didn’t like was the lack of diversity. There was no LGBT representation and very little POC representation. It’s 2021 folks! We. Need. Representation!! It’s so important for readers to be able to see themselves in stories, and not just as a side character or a token character that fits into all of the discriminatory tropes.

I borrowed the second book from the library, and I plan on reading the final one when it comes out this spring: A CROWN OF GILDED BONES, because the second book in the series left off on a bit of a cliff hanger. I want to see where Armentrout takes the story given the ending of book two.

While this wasn’t my favorite read of 2020, it was still a pretty good story and helped me to understand a little of what the fantasy romance genre looks like currently.

Overall, I’d rate this one as 3.5 stars out of 5. If you’re looking for an escape story with drama, fantastical elements, and some decent heat, check it out!

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Thanks for reading,

Abbie

Book Review

Book Review: The Shadows Between Us by Tricia Levenseller

Have you ever been hooked on a book from the very first line?

I’m not talking about Austen’s “It is a truth universally acknowledged…” because that is, clearly, a classic. What I’m talking about is a novel released recently (let’s call it the last ten years) that just absolutely HOOKS you from the very first sentence?

It’s been a long time since that’s happened for me. In fact, I can’t remember the last time I was taken in by a book so quickly.

As with all things 2020, finding good reading material has been a challenge. I’ve reread books and started new ones so far. With most of my favorite authors’ new releases not out until 2021 or beyond, I’ve been in a bit of a book slump.

Until…

A friend of mine suggested Tricia Levenseller’s THE SHADOWS BETWEEN US. Given that she and I have similar tastes in books and plotlines, I knew by her rave review that I would enjoy it. What I didn’t expect was for it to be the best book I have read in 2020!

I read this book via the Overdrive app through my library, so no fancy bookstagram posts this time!

Pitched by Kerri Maniscalco, bestselling author of STALKING JACK THE RIPPER as “The Slytherin romance we’ve all been waiting for,” I was ecstatic to read this.

Anyone who has listened to me talk about my writing passions knows that one of my favorite characters in the Harry Potter world is Bellatrix Lestrange. However, it’s not because of anything we see in the Potter books. The reason I love her so much is because I assumed this character back in the mid-2000s back when forum roleplaying was a thing. I explored the depths of this dark character, I really dove in and tried to figure out what made her tick–alongside the dashing man she married. Put simply, I’ve been dying for someone to understand my love of the dark side and put it into print.

When I say I fell in love from the first line, y’all, check this out.

I was hooked from the very first sentence. I have a great love of true crime and murders in particular (I am currently working my way through YEARS of the Podcast, My Favorite Murder!). If you can have murder, intrigue, and a character that’s not afraid to get their hands a little dirty, I. Am. Hooked.

As we meet the main character, Alessandra, we learn of not only her ambitions, but her determination to be uniquely herself. She is not a heroine. She’s an anti-heroine. Her father is finally bringing her to court–after severely admonishing her for her dalliances with young men–and Alessandra has her eyes set on one person and one person alone: the King. Alessandra is ambitious and unapologetic. She wants to woo the king, marry him, then kill him and assume his power. What she finds is completely different than anything she could have ever expected.

Kallias is an intriguing, alluring, and confusing character. It takes time for him to open up, but once he does, the story blossoms. It does have a “fake dating” trope to it, but I found the two characters’ interactions to be charming.

Especially when Alessandra and Kallias go skinny dipping in a lake together and she tells him that she’s not a virgin. Surprisingly, we see a feminist in Kallias when he assures her that he won’t judge her for the things he’s allowed to do. We. Love. A. Feminist!

All in all, this story touched the deep dark parts of my Bellatrix heart and made me long for my own Slytherin romance (one day)! If you’re looking for something a little dark with a lot of fantasy and interesting characters that you just can’t help but root for, check it out!

I give this one 5/5 stars simply because it is the best book I’ve read in 2020. You definitely want to put this on your TBR list!

Thanks for reading,
Abbie